
The Sunday tea meeting was a ritual, the Hashimoro family carried out without fail. The elderly couple lived by themselves in their old ancestral home. Their son, daughter in law and both the grandchildren visited them from the city, which was about an hour’s drive from there.
Every Sunday no matter what, the family never failed to be present for this evening of bonding over tea. Life went on as usual until old Mr. Hashimoro passed away.
After his death, his wife continued to live alone in the house as she had many beautiful memories attached to the place.
The following Sunday evening, with a heavy heart Mrs. Hashimoro, set the table with five tea cups, looking sadly at the sixth one in the cupboard, missing her husband even more. She went into the kitchen to get some snacks to serve along with the tea. The plate of cookies dropped from her trembling hands as she came to the table. The sixth tea cup was on the table….
I love the story!❤
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Thanks Aashi🙂
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This is good Radhika! He couldn’t stay away from the family gathering.
Thanks for joining in the challenge
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Thanks Sadje. Yes, sometimes the bond the family shares is so strong that the soul finds it difficult to move on.
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You’re welcome 😉
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Wow, incredible suspense
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Thank you Jude
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My pleasure 🌼
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So good!
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Thanks Rahul 🙂
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Wow 👏👏
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🙏🙂
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With the name Hashimoro family I thought about Shin Chan 😀
The ending is amazing and intriguing.
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Haha. Now that you mention it, I remember the name. My kids used to watch it long time back. 😀
Thanks Kritika ❣️
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Pleasure is mine always 🙂
I love watching cartoons. 😀
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Nice story 👌
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Thanks S🙂
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Mystic picture with perfect synchronized story, too good Radhika 👏👏
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Thanks a lot Deeksha 🙂
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Nice Story Radhika
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Many thanks Sri!
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I loved this take R, and the title! So well written! 👏🏼👏🏼
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Happy to hear that HS :). Thanks!!
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Nicely done 🙂 It reminds me of the time just after my father passed away. We had family visiting and without thinking I set his place as usual. We drank a little toast to his empty chair.
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I know, its so difficult to accept that someone so dear to us is no more with us. Thanks Chris. Take care!
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Haha nice one Radhika 👌
The suspense and the sentiment both were well portrayed 🙌
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Thank you Sureka :). I am glad that you liked it 🙂
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Oh my! Love the story and the surprise ending, Radhika!❤️
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Thanks dear Punam 🙂
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You are welcome, dear. 😊
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Loved the ending, nice story ☺☺
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Many thanks Era !!
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😊😊
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Wow, this is so good 👌 The bond and love of being together cannot be taken away by physical absence. Beautifully conveyed 💕💞
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You are a master of short fiction! I think I said it before, but worth saying again!
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Many thanks my friend for the honor bestowed 🙏😇
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Welcome. You really really really deserve it!
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🙏🙏
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Wow nice 👍🏻
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Thanks Shruti 🙂
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Welcome Radhika 🌸
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The somber scenario, a haunted atmosphere, a very close knit family of six, a bereavement, as backdrop is certainly not a scenario of a picnic.
Radhika knits a web of imagination to lead the reader with an aura of unsolved mystery and soliloquy, about the sixth cup.
A narration cloaked in chilling suspense..
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Wow! Your narrative to my story makes a wonderful read. I am humbled. Thanks so much for this appreciation ❤️
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Very imaginative, Radhika!
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🙏🙏
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Fantastic, very apt for the image.
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Thank you Rupali!
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Put a smile on my face. Soul finding it’s way to family traditions 😊
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Yeah, I’ve heard a few instances like that from elders in the family. 🙂
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Wow, Radhika what an awesome story and the picture was apt with your wonderful story. Loved reading it.
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Thanks Kamal. Glad you liked it 😊
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Yes too good 👍👍👍👍 Radhika. Welcome dear
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Touching story
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Thank you Drew!
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🌹😘
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Superb story! Thoroughly captivating.💫✨
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Thanks Chetna. Glad you think so🙂
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Radhika, the photo is so atmospheric. Loved the story and the twist at the end! All the best, Cheryl
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Thank you so much Cheryl. The photo was the prompt around which we had to weave a story or poem.
Take care and stay safe 💕
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So lovely story Radhika!!!
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Thank you Paulo
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Wow. This is so beautifully written. That must have taken some weight off her shoulders. Well done, my dear ❤️
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Thank you Shweta 🙂
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The connection is deep.
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Thanks Harsh
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Perfectly spooky.
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Thanks Asha.
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Wow, R! Kudos to your imagination and your style of fitting diverse emotions in such a concise piece of art! Loved it!
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Appreciate the feedback and constant support N. Many thanks 🙏
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Wow amazing feel, I feel so good of reading this story. Kindly write more like this.
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Thanks so much Meenakshi. Will try 😊👍🏻
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I enjoyed your tale, Ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks Aishwarya
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Should not have read this at 12:00 am but oh well. Haha love this short and spooky story❤️
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Haha! Hope you slept well. Thanks Shreya 😊
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spooky and nice
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Thanks Prakriti!
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Nice Story… ❤
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Thank you 😊
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🌹 i hope she prepared it for 6 cups instead of 5 😊
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Your guess is as good as mine 🙂
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