Abstract figures, contours,
appear to ramble
incoherent thoughts.
The jagged emotions
deftly concealed
behind the colors bright.
Only the discerning eye
reads between the lines
to decipher the depth of pain.
Abstract figures, contours,
appear to ramble
incoherent thoughts.
The jagged emotions
deftly concealed
behind the colors bright.
Only the discerning eye
reads between the lines
to decipher the depth of pain.
Creativity and Imagination at its best, great piece Radhika ! 💖✨
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Thanks a lot Piyush 😇
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Great take!
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Thank you Aashi!
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A great response
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Many thanks Lorraine!
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We all do need that discerning eye. Excellent work. 😇
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Thank you Harsh 🙏
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Love your writing R! 👌👌
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Happy to hear that. Thanks HS 😊
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The words are weaved beautifully Radhika, unsung verse and hymn retaining beauty intoxicating the brain:)
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Thanks Vishal for that lovely comment 😊
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Excellent Radhika, consistent good writing, Amazing.
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Thank you so much Sri 🙏
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❤❤❤
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🙏😇
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Abstract art and interpretation….depends, Isn’t it , Radhika?!😊
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Yes Indira, the interpretation can be very personal to each one.
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That’s really quite excellent: “jagged emotions”. That is how some of them feel; and love the abstract feeling to this one.
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Thanks Benjamin. Glad it connected with you 🙂
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🙂
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Mam, I don’t find words to praise this awesome piece you have written
So so beautiful 💙💙
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Aww…. thanks a ton for the compliment Era. So glad you liked it 🤗
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my pleasure 🤗💛
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Oh this is gorgeous Radhika, I love it
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Thank you Jude!
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Gorgeous
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True that is. Love the usage of words. Wonderful read.
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Thank you Kritika ♥️
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You are welcome 😊🌷
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Well done. Good eye!
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Thank you VJ
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Welcome!
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Excellent 👍
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Thanks S!
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An absolute glimpse of human nature, sharp edged but useful to mend bridges, smooth sometimes like a deadly venom,
Shapes do matter, but what do they conceal within is not easy to know….Life….life it is
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Right, what they conceal within always remains a mystery.
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So beautiful Radhika, your words float and the last verse is brilliant and inspiring, have a nice week!!!
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Appreciate your kind words Paulo. Thanks so much and you have a lovely week. Take care!
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True words penned for a human nature, jagged at the edges and can never know what is going on. Lovely poem, Radhika.
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What we hide within us is many times unseen by the world. Very few can see the pain behind the smile.
Thanks Kamal.
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Yes very few can seen the pain behind the smile. You are welcome Radhika.
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OMG, Radhika! Your last line gives very difficult goals – to decipher the depth of pain. Excellent take!
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Thanks so much Reena. This was a very interesting and new concept to me. Thanks for the lovely prompt. Glad you liked my interpretation.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Hidden emotions …. by Radhika
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Deciphering the depths of pain. That line really resonated with me and made me feel all the emotions! Thanks for your post. This poem is an outstanding work of art.
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Thank you Annie for such a lovely compliment. So lovely to have you here.
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A gorgeous poem that, to me, is a perfect take on the painting! You always deliver!
All the best! Cheryl
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Happy you think so Cheryl. Thank you. Have a great week ahead!
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This was great I also write poetry would like if can look at my post and give me some insights
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Thanks Anurag. Will check out your blog soon!
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Fantastic take, Radhika! ❤️
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Thank you Punam!
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You are welcome, dear.
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Well said, Ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks Aishwarya
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Its a wonder how some people are able to extract emotions out of the abstract art displayed during the art festivals.
I think it takes a discerning eye, as you point it out, something we might need to cultivate.
Nice poem, well written.
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Beautiful
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Oh ma’am it’s beyond words you are very great in expressing feelings with beautiful words ❤️🙏🏻🏆
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And you always support me with your loving feedback. Thank you from the bottom of my heart Meenakshi ♥️🙏
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Wholly my pleasure, write more to delight us 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Sure 👍
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Wowwww…. wonderful interpretation of the picture Radhika!!!
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Many thanks Deeksha 🤗
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Brilliant!
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Thank you Susi!
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You’re welcome, Radhika! 🙂
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👌👌👌👌👌
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I love this take on an abstract painting, R. I can never make anything out of such paintings – guess I’m not tuned into delving into the minds of such painters. But you did splendidly!
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Thanks N. Art of cubism is new to me as well. Had to look it up before attempting to write something 🙂
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And you’ve been quick to grasp it as usual! 🙂
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Thanks for sharing
Stay wealthy healthy safe and happy
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Stunning the depth of emotion here!
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Thank you Jaya
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