What 100 words would you weave around this picture? Challenge hosted by Bikurgurl
The murder appeared to be perfectly planned.
Unopened suitcases, crumpled sheets and jackets didn’t add up.
The interrogation with all the possible people connected, didn’t reveal much.
The lack of any lead gave the inspector sleepless nights. Was this going to be the first unsolved case of his career?
With the sequence of events continuously playing on his mind, it suddenly flashed to him. He jumped out of his bed in the middle of the night and rushed to the hotel.
And there in the remote corner, under the table he found his clue. He could now nab the killer!
Word count:100
As clear as a scene from a movie!
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Haha! Maybe the effect of watching many thrillers 😀
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I agree with HS. Great take!!
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Thank you Aashi 💕
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Nice take, Ma’am. 🙂 Wishing the inspector luck.
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Thanks Aishwarya. Well I hope his dedication was right 🙂
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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I could see everything. Great take!!
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Thanks Akshita
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Wow…sounds to me like a screenplay..❤❤❤
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Thanks dear Mich 😊♥️
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Amazing attempt!
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Many thanks Kamya!
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Can someone throw me these challenges as well 🙂
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Gripping one. 😮
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Thank you Harsh 🙂
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It was the dolphin..ryt?
Nice take though,Radhika.✨💫
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Hmm… anything could be possible. Thanks Chetna!!
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Wow!!! Great take 🙂
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Thanks a lot Era💙
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Pleasure is all mine💙
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Amazing story, given the constraint. Well written thriller Radhika 🙌
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Thank you Sureka 🙌
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Crisp and perfect…
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Many thanks Shilpa 😊
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Beautifully written, I wanted to keep reading
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Thanks so much. Happy to read your feedback Jude ☺️
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My pleasure 🌼
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Thrilling!!!
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Thank you Cindy 😊
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Excellent write with a very creative take! You did a great job, Radhika!
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Thanks a lot for your generous appreciation Rishika!
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If time permits, watch Broadchurch on Netflix Radhika. Your mystery in the story reminded me this exciting web series.
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Thanks Deeksha. Will definitely watch. I love mystery stories!!
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Ahahahah! Nice one. Good luck to the inspector! 😁
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Thanks Velu. I hope his hunch is right!!
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Interesting haa Radhika!
How you summed up the whole story in exact 100 words and yes it kept the Audience gripped.
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Thanks dear Rashmi. Glad you liked my attempt 😊
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This is very effective because the suspense never goes away. You push it to the front the whole time! You always impress with your flash fiction.
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Happy that you enjoyed it Benjamin. Thanks a ton!!
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Welcome!
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Always love to read your stories, happy I got one today 👌🏻❤️
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Your comment brought a smile Meenakshi. Thanks 💚💙
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Excellent write, Radhika! You kept it taut and intriguing.
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Thank you Punam!!
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You are welcome.
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Now I’m dying to know what the inspector thought of! Thank you for joining us again this week as we weave our 100 Words 🖤
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Thanks a lot 😊
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Brilliant, R! Can you please continue…another 100 words please…
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Haha! Thanks N for encouraging my feeble attempt. I wasn’t happy with this one. Was in two minds whether to post or not. Finally posted it after lot of deliberation.
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Good you decided for. I personally think it has the trappings of a good start to a thriller.
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I am a self critic. So feel I still need a lot of polishing on my writing 🙂
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Aren’t we all? And I think that is what helps us push for perfection! But I feel you have to pause somewhere, even if for a tiny bit, and see how far you have come. 🙂
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Agree!!
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Radhika.. I could only wish for a Part 2 of this 😀
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Will think about it. Thanks for the encouragement Nima!
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You must Radhika.. amd am sure, it will be a great hit ❤️
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