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The Wait…

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Pacing outside the operation theater, waiting for the doctor to give him a thumbs up, time passed in slow motion.

WC: 20 words

In response to Bulbul’s bubble, 20 word story prompt : Slow Motion

64 comments on “The Wait…

  1. HappySoul
    August 14, 2020

    Wow! a tension filled story ..

    Liked by 3 people

  2. Untold Stories
    August 14, 2020

    Wonderful!

    Liked by 3 people

  3. uzzawal1911
    August 14, 2020

    Amazing response to the prompt, well done! πŸ™Œ

    Liked by 2 people

  4. positivesideofcoin
    August 14, 2020

    Amazingly doneπŸ™ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.

    Liked by 2 people

  5. Kritika
    August 14, 2020

    The 20 words expressed a beautiful story.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Rishika Kakar
    August 14, 2020

    This is so nerve wracking. Beautifully written!

    Liked by 2 people

  7. Sukanya
    August 14, 2020

    Beautiful πŸ™‚

    Liked by 3 people

  8. Era
    August 14, 2020

    in few words, you expressed it so well

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Era
    August 14, 2020

    In few words, you have expressed this so beautifully!!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Annika Perry
    August 14, 2020

    Radhika, this is superb … nearly too good as I’m eager to read on! It’s amazing how just these 20 words are so compelling and pull us into the story! Well done!

    Liked by 2 people

  11. Shweta Suresh
    August 14, 2020

    It would have been excruciatingly slow. Great take, dear β™₯️

    Liked by 1 person

  12. bejamin4
    August 14, 2020

    Few words. But intensity and strength and emotion. And an ending that leaves us guessing. Impressive.

    Liked by 2 people

  13. Joana
    August 14, 2020

    Limited words but tells so much πŸ‘ŒπŸΌ

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Silver Stone
    August 14, 2020

    Even though this was short, the impact the words had was huge. Superb take on the prompt!

    Liked by 1 person

  15. boundlessblessingsblog
    August 14, 2020

    Very nice take on the picture, Radhika.

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Cozy Quiet Corner
    August 14, 2020

    Very well expressed! πŸ˜ŠπŸ’š

    Like

  17. Indira
    August 14, 2020

    Well interpreted the picture, Radhika!

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  18. Bulbul
    August 14, 2020

    This is very well crafted! In mere twenty-words, you delivered such an impactful piece. Thank you so much for joining in, I am super elated. Cheers πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Nima Mohan
    August 14, 2020

    How well did you corporate a story in 20 words Radhika πŸ™‚

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  20. kittysverses
    August 14, 2020

    Well expressed in few words, Ma’am. I hope his wait ends soon. πŸ™‚

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  21. writefunnydramatrue
    August 15, 2020

    Wow! That’s so good

    Like

  22. Beauty lays in simplicity, very well achieved, Radhika.

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  23. judeitakali
    August 15, 2020

    Very nice πŸ‘ŒπŸΎ

    Liked by 1 person

  24. DeepikasRamblings
    August 15, 2020

    The wait, brings out the tension and anxiety. Well expressed, Radhika πŸ‘

    Like

  25. paeansunplugged
    August 15, 2020

    Radhika, this is terrific! You caught the mood exactly.

    Liked by 1 person

  26. I love it, really want more πŸ’–

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  27. I love it, really want more like this

    Liked by 1 person

  28. michnavs
    August 16, 2020

    Ohhh you captured the agonizing wait outside the operating room so well….☺☺☺

    Liked by 1 person

  29. Narendra Nayak
    August 16, 2020

    This is superb, R! A story with endless possibilities.

    Like

  30. The Typewriter
    August 16, 2020

    Could feel it totally.. Wonderful.. So thoughtfully put.. πŸ€—πŸ˜ŠπŸ’•

    Liked by 1 person

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  32. Deeksha Pathak
    August 18, 2020

    So true and perfectly defined ‘wait’

    Liked by 1 person

  33. Aashi D Parekh
    August 25, 2020

    Gravity encompassed! Nice story!

    Liked by 1 person

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