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Birth of Dawn!

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The nascent amber rays trickle in

with a gentle caress, a loving cajole

it folds in, the obscurity of the night

 under its sublime embrace.

Smiling and aroused,

the moon passes the baton to the rising star

her radiance merges with his dazzle

seamless and graceful, a union so perfect

they birth a new day.

As the colors of dawn fills in

eyes behold the magnificence of nature

as the mystical drama unfolds

on the eastern horizon

when night meets day.

Eugi’s weekly prompt : Night meets day

V. J’s weekly challenge #109 : What a sight

75 comments on “Birth of Dawn!

  1. DeepikasRamblings
    August 20, 2020

    Ah, I could just visualise the birth of dawn. So beautifully carved, to perfection 👌👌

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Kritika
    August 20, 2020

    Beautiful imagery formed.
    ‘the moon passes the baton to the rising star
    her radiance merges with his dazzle’ Wonderful.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Gracefully penned
    Stay safe wealthy healthy and happy

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Sri
    August 20, 2020

    Beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Cozy Quiet Corner
    August 20, 2020

    Wonderful 💜 you’ve painted a beautiful image with your words

    Liked by 1 person

  6. voidspace144
    August 20, 2020

    The kissing of the sun and the moon! 🌝🌞

    Liked by 1 person

  7. kittysverses
    August 20, 2020

    Ah! Indeed a mystical drama. Beautiful descriptions, Ma’am. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Nathi
    August 20, 2020

    Mystical and beautifully penned, Radhika✨

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Shweta Suresh
    August 20, 2020

    Such magical lines. I loved this one. Beautifully written, my dear ❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  10. boundlessblessingsblog
    August 20, 2020

    Awesome and splendid poem when night meets day and a new dawn is born. The picture too is perfect, Radhika.

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Sukanya
    August 20, 2020

    Beautiful ❣️❣️❣️

    Liked by 2 people

  12. yassy
    August 20, 2020

    Ah !!! Beautiful!!!

    Liked by 2 people

  13. Nawazish
    August 20, 2020

    Gracefully written!

    Liked by 2 people

  14. bejamin4
    August 20, 2020

    Magical. You’re a fantastic wordsmith.

    Liked by 2 people

  15. Era
    August 20, 2020

    Beautiful 🤩

    Liked by 2 people

  16. judeitakali
    August 20, 2020

    This is gorgeous. I love that photo

    Liked by 2 people

  17. Pallavi
    August 20, 2020

    A perfect union manifesting the birthing of dawn! Such beautiful lines.

    Liked by 2 people

  18. Indira
    August 20, 2020

    Beautiful picturisation of dawn, Radhika!

    Liked by 2 people

  19. V.J. Knutson
    August 20, 2020

    Rich description and personification

    Liked by 1 person

  20. Untold Stories
    August 20, 2020

    How Beautifully and how creatively this piece is written!

    I wanna see the birth of dawn of it’s this beautiful.
    Good job Radhika!
    You’re a wonderful artist I must say ✨

    Liked by 1 person

  21. almeidadepaulo
    August 20, 2020

    Beautiful and magical Radhika, stay safe and well!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  22. HappySoul
    August 20, 2020

    Ah, that moment.. and I love the way you have placed your words .. just beautiful !!

    Liked by 1 person

  23. -Eugenia
    August 20, 2020

    Every line beautifully penned. A true masterpiece, Radhika!

    Like

  24. The way you described made to fall in love with dawn along with your words maam

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  25. Megha's World
    August 20, 2020

    I have always loved your wordplay. Beautifully written Radhika.

    Liked by 1 person

  26. radhikasreflection
    August 21, 2020

    So happy that my words brought alive this beautiful pair for you. Thanks a ton Rishika

    Like

  27. extinct0703
    August 21, 2020

    That’s beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

  28. michnavs
    August 21, 2020

    ahhh Radhika, i could sit dow, close my eyes and see the world through your words..

    Liked by 1 person

  29. Rishika Kakar
    August 21, 2020

    The moon and the rising star make such a beautiful pair. I could actually visualise the birth of a new day. Beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

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  33. Aashi D Parekh
    August 25, 2020

    Wonderful imagery! Great read!

    Liked by 1 person

  34. Olga
    August 27, 2020

    Beautiful description of this mystical drama. Your words seeped into my senses. Sublime poetry, Radhika. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  35. sangita2020
    October 8, 2020

    Such a magical description of the rise of dawn.

    Liked by 1 person

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