The nascent amber rays trickle in
with a gentle caress, a loving cajole
it folds in, the obscurity of the night
under its sublime embrace.
Smiling and aroused,
the moon passes the baton to the rising star
her radiance merges with his dazzle
seamless and graceful, a union so perfect
they birth a new day.
As the colors of dawn fills in
eyes behold the magnificence of nature
as the mystical drama unfolds
on the eastern horizon
when night meets day.
Ah, I could just visualise the birth of dawn. So beautifully carved, to perfection 👌👌
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Glad that my words drew it out for you. Thanks Deepika 🙂
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Beautiful imagery formed.
‘the moon passes the baton to the rising star
her radiance merges with his dazzle’ Wonderful.
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Thanks so much Kritika. Happy you liked it 😊
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Pleasure is mine 🙂
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Gracefully penned
Stay safe wealthy healthy and happy
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Thanks Kanika. You too take care ❣️
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🙏😊
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Beautiful
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Thanks Sri
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Wonderful 💜 you’ve painted a beautiful image with your words
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Thanks so much Priya 💙
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The kissing of the sun and the moon! 🌝🌞
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Yes, beautiful spectacle!
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Ah! Indeed a mystical drama. Beautiful descriptions, Ma’am. 🙂
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Many thanks Aishwarya ❣️
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Mystical and beautifully penned, Radhika✨
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Thank you Shruthi ❣️
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Always my pleasure 😇
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Such magical lines. I loved this one. Beautifully written, my dear ❤️
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Glad you liked it Shweta. Thanks a lot ♥️
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My pleasure 🙂
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Awesome and splendid poem when night meets day and a new dawn is born. The picture too is perfect, Radhika.
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Thanks Kamal!!
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Welcome Radhika 😊😊😊
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Beautiful ❣️❣️❣️
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Thank you Sukanya!
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Ah !!! Beautiful!!!
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Thanks Yasmin!
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Gracefully written!
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🙏😊
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Magical. You’re a fantastic wordsmith.
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Humbled my dear friend. Thanks 😇
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Welcome. You know how to hook a reader in and leave them hooked.
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🙏😇
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Beautiful 🤩
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Many thanks Era 🙂
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☺☺
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This is gorgeous. I love that photo
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Thanks a lot Jude 🙂
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A perfect union manifesting the birthing of dawn! Such beautiful lines.
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Thank you so much Pallavi!
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Beautiful picturisation of dawn, Radhika!
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Thanks Indira. And each day a different picture at dawn.😊
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Rich description and personification
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Thank you V. J!
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Welcome!
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How Beautifully and how creatively this piece is written!
I wanna see the birth of dawn of it’s this beautiful.
Good job Radhika!
You’re a wonderful artist I must say ✨
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Thanks a lot Rashmi for the appreciation. ❤ !
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Beautiful and magical Radhika, stay safe and well!!!
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Thank you Paulo. You too!
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Ah, that moment.. and I love the way you have placed your words .. just beautiful !!
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Thanks a bunch HS!
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Every line beautifully penned. A true masterpiece, Radhika!
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The way you described made to fall in love with dawn along with your words maam
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Thank you Meenakshi!
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I have always loved your wordplay. Beautifully written Radhika.
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Thank you so much Megha 🙂
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So happy that my words brought alive this beautiful pair for you. Thanks a ton Rishika
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That’s beautiful!
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🙏 Dhiraj
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😊😊😊
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ahhh Radhika, i could sit dow, close my eyes and see the world through your words..
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Thanks so much Mich 💖
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The moon and the rising star make such a beautiful pair. I could actually visualise the birth of a new day. Beautiful!
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Wonderful imagery! Great read!
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Many thanks Aashi 💕
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Beautiful description of this mystical drama. Your words seeped into my senses. Sublime poetry, Radhika. ❤
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Your comment makes me feel so happy. Thanks so much Olga ♥️
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Such a magical description of the rise of dawn.
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Many thanks Sangita
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Beauty in words that created a glorious picture. Thank you.
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Many thanks Frank 😊
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