Finally, freed from the mortal body,
the soul travels on an astral journey,
where endless peace envelopes it.
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Hope my final journey will be as beautiful as this.
The final journey…
Finally, freed from the mortal body,
the soul travels on an astral journey,
where endless peace envelopes it.
Word count :18
Hope my final journey will be as beautiful as this.
radhikasreflection 
Beautiful, Radhika! All the best! Cheryl
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Thank you Cheryl!
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Nice one R.. ! Isn’t it? That’s the thought I got too.. “hope my final journey will be as peaceful” and I read it at the end
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Thanks HS. Yes, hoping for that when it happens.
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Yes Radhika. Simple truth of life so beautifully expressed. I guess, everyone would long for a simple, peaceful journey 👍
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Absolutely, that’s what is wished for. Thanks Deepika
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Wow it really wonderful 👍👍
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Thanks Dulcy
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Beautiful !
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Thanks Era ❣️
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💞🤗
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A small and simple journey towards enlightenment, really thought provoking words 🙂
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Thanks so much Shashank!
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Nicely written Radhika, reading the poem itself gave me a certain level of peace. Well done 🙌
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Thanks a lot Uzzawal 🙏
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Brilliant! You’ve put the journey in the Afterlife in such a poignant manner. Your words deliver serenity. Love it!
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Makes me happy to read your feedback Rishika. Thanks a bunch!
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Nice take on prompt 👍
Hopefully last journeys becomes peaceful!
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Amen. Thanks Rashmi
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Couldn’t be so true about astral journey of the soul. You can’t believe it yesterday a friend’s Dad passed away and as he was resting on the pyre, wondered what the soul must be thinking. True, he looked peaceful before foraying on his final journey.
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How the final bell of life rings is beyond our control. Hope he had a good life. Take care.
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We all wish our final journey to be so peaceful! I wish the present journey also could be with a bit of peace and joy then till the last moment no complaints!!
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That would be so nice Deeksha if we experienced peace in life and death.
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Of course why will it not be. You are so right and a lovely challenge taken on the world Endless.
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Thanks so much Kamal 🙏
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Welcome dear Radhika.
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To some that would a blessed relief, to others pure joy.
My eighteen!
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Thanks Keith!
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Interesting composition on the theme, radhika!
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Thank you Indira
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That’s a nice thought, Ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks Aishwarya 🙂
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Reading this, I also hope that my astral journey is like this. If a writeup can make me feel like that, then it has done its work. Well written, Radhika ! ✨
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I am glad you felt the words Piyush. Thanks a ton. Have a wonderful week ahead 💙🙏
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You too 😊✨
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Beautiful Radhika .. how well you penned . Crisp and meaningful
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Thanks so much Tanvir!
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For sure, you are a beautiful soul. Your words full of peace.
Hope mine too will be 🙏🏻
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I am sure it will be Meenakshi ❣️
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Endless – pretty powerful word. You used it to portray the soul journey so beautifully.
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Apt for the theme, Radhika.
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Thanks Rupali
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