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Tiny Tale – Hiding!

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Two 20 word stories…

  1. Hiding her fears and anxiety, taking a deep breath, she finally jumped off the cliff. ย Bungee jumping was fun afterall!

2. To the world, she was a gorgeous model. No one saw her bruises hid carefully behind the makeup and smile.

In response to Bulbulbubble’s Twenty word story prompt : Hiding

70 comments on “Tiny Tale – Hiding!

  1. Ramya Vivek
    September 4, 2020

    Loved both the tales. ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜€

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Cozy Quiet Corner
    September 4, 2020

    Both are beautiful tales ๐Ÿ’œ

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Aashi D Parekh
    September 4, 2020

    Wonderful tales!!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Dulcy Singh
    September 4, 2020

    Amazing ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

    Liked by 2 people

  5. rajanisingh885721172
    September 4, 2020

    Fabulous post

    Liked by 2 people

  6. DeepikasRamblings
    September 4, 2020

    Adventure and bare truth of life, well stated, Radhika ๐Ÿ‘

    Liked by 2 people

  7. Shweta Suresh
    September 4, 2020

    Very poignant stories. Your first one reminded me of a story I had written a while back ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Deb
    September 4, 2020

    Short, concise and powerful tales both, loved them totally!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Veena
    September 4, 2020

    Radhika you sure can spin interesting tales .

    Liked by 2 people

  10. Era
    September 4, 2020

    both the stories held different meanings, great post mam โ˜บ

    Liked by 1 person

  11. boundlessblessingsblog
    September 4, 2020

    Short and beautifully penned stories, Radhika. That is a mask that we all put on never once showing how we feel inside. The picture was too good.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. HappySoul
    September 4, 2020

    Both are amazing short stories R. Loved them!

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Joana
    September 4, 2020

    1. I was terrified when I read that she jumped off a cliff then relief that it was just a bungee jump ๐Ÿ˜…

    2. Behind the beautiful facade thereโ€™s the chaos.

    Great stories ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

    Liked by 2 people

    • radhikasreflection
      September 4, 2020

      Yes, that was my intention in the first one ๐Ÿ˜€.
      It is so painful to hide the suffering behind the facade.
      Thanks so much Joana for your lovely feedback ๐Ÿ’™

      Liked by 1 person

      • Joana
        September 5, 2020

        Nice style of writing ๐Ÿ˜„
        By the way, Iโ€™m trying to gather some bloggers to join in on a Blog Directory that Iโ€™m creating. This will help bloggers discover new blogs to follow. Would you like to join? If you do, I need to borrow your time to fill up some details about your blog, if thatโ€™s alright. ๐Ÿ˜Itโ€™s all here in this link: https://giganticthoughtbubble.blog/2020/09/04/blog-directory/
        Thank you! I hope youโ€™ll join. ๐Ÿค—

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      • radhikasreflection
        September 5, 2020

        Thanks Joana. Will check out your link soon ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

        Like

  14. Indira
    September 4, 2020

    Two opposite emotions in these compositions, Radhika!

    Liked by 2 people

  15. Glee Sparkle
    September 4, 2020

    Very Well written!!! ๐Ÿ’•

    Donโ€™t forget to Glee and spread Sparkles โœจ
    -Nani ๐Ÿ’–

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Bulbul
    September 4, 2020

    Loved both of them! Written very beautifully, indeed. I can’t seem to pick my favorite from the two. So glad to have you on board. Cheers

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Chetna
    September 4, 2020

    Ohhh! Bungee jumping๐Ÿค๐Ÿค
    Both of them were very nice, Radhika.โœจ

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Harsh
    September 4, 2020

    Nice takes!

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Cindy Georgakas
    September 4, 2020

    Thank god for the bungee cord Rahika!
    And we all have bruises behind the make up!

    Liked by 1 person

  20. almeidadepaulo
    September 5, 2020

    Beautiful tales Radhika, stay safe and well!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  21. parneetsachdev
    September 5, 2020

    Poignant and true. Youโ€™re so right. The world doesnโ€™t need to see our bruises. They are ours and we will heal them. So much meaning in twenty words. I reiterate my original views. โ€œYou are definitely gifted with talent.โ€ warm regards

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  22. Adarsh Pandey
    September 5, 2020

    I have gone through your blogโ€ฆi want to sayโ€ฆโค๏ธโค๏ธ Loved it

    Like

  23. Rishika Kakar
    September 5, 2020

    Oh, I love both of these! They have similar angles, except one chose to take a risk, the other thought it was best to stay hidden. Reminded me of so many instances in our lives, when we’re torn between those two. Excellent writing โค๏ธ

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      September 6, 2020

      Thanks Rishika. As humans we have many commonalities that run among us. I am glad my stories made a connect with you. Have a lovely Sunday โค๏ธ

      Liked by 1 person

  24. Subbashini Meenakshi Sundaram
    September 5, 2020

    Two delivers two different emotions in an unexpected way, โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

    Liked by 1 person

  25. Pallavi
    September 6, 2020

    Ooh I loved the first one. Until the last line I was reading something else as her action.

    Liked by 1 person

  26. Deeksha Pathak
    September 6, 2020

    I loved both stories Radhika. This is amazing- one story in just 20 words!

    Liked by 1 person

  27. radhikasreflection
    September 6, 2020

    Thank you Deeksha ๐Ÿค—

    Like

  28. michnavs
    September 7, 2020

    the no. 2 tale hits me the hardest. i wonder how many women are out there trying to hide all the bruises and pain by smiling, by being beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

  29. Dilip
    September 8, 2020

    Words so beautifully crafted!
    Thanks and regards Radhika ๐Ÿ˜€

    Liked by 1 person

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  31. myexpressionofthoughtsblog
    September 17, 2020

    Both tales are wonderful with a story of there own. Meaningful

    Liked by 1 person

  32. gulfcoastpoet@gmail.com
    September 17, 2020

    Two very successful tiny tales, Radhika! Take care. Cheryl โค

    Liked by 1 person

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