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Haiku – Precipice!

– Harimao Lee

Adrenaline rush

precarious cliff hangar

living on the edge

mindlovemiserysmenagerie’s challenge #334, to use the above pic as an inspiration

65 comments on “Haiku – Precipice!”

  1. HappySoul
    September 30, 2020

    Awesome haiku

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  2. Msdedeng
    September 30, 2020

    Brilliant!

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  3. Susi Bocks
    September 30, 2020

    Definitely an adrenaline rush, but I imagine a beautiful view as well! 🙂

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  4. Roshni
    September 30, 2020

    Your haiku described the image brilliantly👍

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  5. Sukanya
    September 30, 2020

    Nice👍😊🎀❤

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  6. Cindy Georgakas
    September 30, 2020

    Great Hiku and that about sums it up. Good Job Radhika!!!! 👏👏👏👏❤️ Cindy

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  7. Kritika
    September 30, 2020

    Frightening height. Beautiful Haiku.

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  8. Era
    September 30, 2020

    Awesome!

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  9. judeitakali
    September 30, 2020

    Oh wow, that image and those words

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  10. DeepikasRamblings
    September 30, 2020

    Scary, I wouldn’t venture there. Great Haiku ❤️

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  11. Untold Stories
    September 30, 2020

    I am so scared of heights, but I bet it must be worth viewing from top!

    Nice one!

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  12. Olivia Ava
    September 30, 2020

    Beautiful share🧡.

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  13. gulfcoastpoet@gmail.com
    September 30, 2020

    Radhika, you brilliantly described an indescribable building! ❤ All the best! Cheryl

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  14. Rishika Kakar
    September 30, 2020

    Love the haiku! Heights scare me but your words have such a great impact ❤️

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  15. michnavs
    September 30, 2020

    Wow…just wow..

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  16. boundlessblessingsblog
    September 30, 2020

    Great Haiku and the picture was so apt, Radhika.

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  17. Indira
    September 30, 2020

    Mind-blowing pic!! An apt Haiku for the same, Radhika!

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  18. Deb
    September 30, 2020

    If that isn’t living on the edge, nothing is 🙂 very apt description Radhika.
    That actually looks like a bungee jumping Paradise …

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    • radhikasreflection
      October 1, 2020

      I kept looking at the picture trying to figure out, where is it coming up from 😁🤔. Seriously one of the most unique pics I ever saw.

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  19. Infinite Living
    September 30, 2020

    Thrilling picture and your words adding to it!
    Happy to see your post after being away for so long, hope all well 🙂

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  20. Subbashini Meenakshi Sundaram
    October 1, 2020

    I feel this beautiful haiku tells life. Our life is equal to the words on this haiku.

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  21. iScriblr
    October 1, 2020

    Beautiful!❤️

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  22. Srijit Chatterjee
    October 1, 2020

    Beautiful Haiku Radhika! Hope you’re doing good 🙂 🌼

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  23. Aashi D Parekh
    October 1, 2020

    Beautiful!!

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  24. Akhila
    October 1, 2020

    The image giving me a shiver, but yes, it’s a beautiful one and you have well narrated it

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  25. Rupali
    October 1, 2020

    Perfect depiction of the image.

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  26. bejamin4
    October 1, 2020

    Scary picture; I can’t help but think of that fall. Love your haiku, and how you fit in the longer words in the first too lines and then went to shorter ones in the last line. It made it feel like the speeding up of a fall. Great work!

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    • radhikasreflection
      October 1, 2020

      Wow! Loved your analysis of the haiku Ben. Your comments are always much appreciated 🤗 Many thanks!!

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      • bejamin4
        October 1, 2020

        Welcome. I could see great poetical intention; I’m sure it’s just natural for you now to create with such numerous facets in mind.

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  27. V.J. Knutson
    October 1, 2020

    That is taking the expression to the extreme! Whoa!

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  28. Deeksha Pathak
    October 2, 2020

    So true 👍 this could be extremely scary as well a challenge to adore the view for brave hearts.

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  29. ramblingswithusha
    October 8, 2020

    Loved it.

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