Confined to home due to the lockdown, Samir had ample time at hand. Staying alone, Netflix had become his best friend.
That night he watched a horror movie. Though a brave heart, this particular movie left him terrified. Cursing himself for watching it, he went to bed. The scenes from the film kept haunting him before he finally dozed off.
He saw a hooded faceless lady walk through the wall and give him a rose. There was something so sinister about her smile. Sweating profusely, he woke up with a start. Relieved that it was just his hallucination and a bad dream, he turned to go back to sleep.
And then, he saw it…
Paralysed with fear, he could hear his heart hammer against his chest. He tried to scream but his voice choked within. A spine tingling sensation began to creep up as he began gasping for breath.
For next to him on the bed lay a red rose…
Superb! Loved the ending👏👏👏
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Thanks Ramya 😊
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Amazing work!❤
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Many thanks N❣️
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Quite captivating story….
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Thanks Jimmy 😊
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Very nice!
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Thank you 😊
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Oops! A nightmare that doesn’t end of waking up… Nice chilly one that Radhika.
I left my Netflix subscription, but while I had that I saw a varied assortment of horror movies, thankfully was not awarded a 🌹 for my bravery 😃
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Haha! Horror is not my cup of tea. Can’t sleep for nights when I watch one. So have stopped watching that genre now. Not worth losing sleep over it 😁.
Thanks Deb. Enjoy the long weekend!
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The ending👏
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Thanks Akshita 💙
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Beautiful..
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Thanks Athira!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Wow…a spine chilling one 👍 mission ‘horror’ well accomplished 👍👍
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Glad mission was accomplished. Thanks Roshni 😊😊
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Ending👏👏👏👏 🌹🌹🌹
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Thank you Vani 😊♥️
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Amazing!
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Thanks Era!
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Pleasure always 😀
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Well done, Radhika! Spine chilling ending.
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Thanks so much Punam!
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You are welcome.
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Nice !
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Thanks J!
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Lovely and loved the way you composed Radhika.
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Thank you Tanvir
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It’s scary!
Loved your take on it!
And I would like to add that the vocabulary you use in your blogs is away from usual helping me to learn new words, it’s amazing!
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Thanks Rashmi. Glad that you are learning some new words. I too have learnt so many new words here, in fact am still learning 😊
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Earlier comment goes missing here,
It’s scary!
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😁😂
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Wow….lovely!
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Thanks Arlene!
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Terrifying tale😰
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Glad it evoked that feeling Jude. Thanks
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It really did
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Fabulous horror story👍🏻👍🏻 I wanted something more ,you can make a second part also.😀😀💕
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Thank you so much Dulcy. Will think about it 🙂
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A chilly tale Radhika and super spooky! You are amazing and absolutely love it. How about having a longer version for you know how to terrify your readers with the right narration and description.
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Haha! Thanks so much Vishal. Happy that it had the desired effect 😊. I seriously have to think about how to maintain the interest of the reader on the longer version of the story. Let me try if I can come up with one. Thanks for the encouragement though 😊
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Omg! That ending!!! A very gripping story, my dear ❤️
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Coming from you I take it as a huge compliment Shweta ♥️🙏
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Oh that’s vey kind of you
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Creeeepy 👻 good one R
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Many thanks HS!
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A seed for a horror movie!!😊
Great job, Radhika!!!
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Thank you Indira
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And that faceless smile is somewhere around, only the hood is missing 🙂
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
The Red Rose ….. by Radhika
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Radhika, without having interest in horror movies if you can write this climax then we just don’t want to think what we would get if this would be your comfort zone!!
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Thanks so much for your words of appreciation Deeksha 🤗
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Spooky! Such a creative take on the prompt. Your words held my attention from the beginning till the end. Delightful work. ❤️❤️
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Thanks so much dear 💖
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I am reading this at night 11.30 and now I become like the hero of your story. Very scary 🤨
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😁😁. Hope you slept well
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A chilling story. Loved how you wrote it. I love horror but hope an ending like this never happens with me.
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Yes, such things are good only in books and not in real life. Thanks 😊
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Beauty and terror come together – so well done!
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Thank you Pragalbha!
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Ending is the new beginning! 🌼
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Yes, it can be… 👍🏻
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Love the writing and the theme 🥰
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Thank you Becky 😊
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Really amazing work!
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Thanks Madhura
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The horror!
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This is scary. Can feel the Halloween vibes all around WP now.
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Nicely written. But I just hope I can sleep now😛
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Loved it..Read more than twice… the ending was just greaat!!
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Thanks a lot Deepshikha 😊
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Omg, this gave me goose bumps.
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Purpose served then Usha. Thanks 😊
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Awesome!
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Yes. It works perfectly for the prompt. Thanks!
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