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Tanka – Unrecognizable!

Image credit; Phmaxiestevez @ Pixabay

lost intimacy

relationship turns turbid

oppressive control

fists scar her innate psyche

succumbs to insanity

Sadje’s WDYS : Does this picture inspire you to write something?

V,J’s weekly challenge #121 : Intimacy

60 comments on “Tanka – Unrecognizable!

  1. Sadje
    November 16, 2020

    So poignant! Thanks for joining in

    Liked by 1 person

  2. boundlessblessingsblog
    November 16, 2020

    Brilliant and beautiful tanka on lost intimacy, Radhika. The picture is so apt and she looks so lost.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Nawazish
    November 16, 2020

    Wow!🀩🀩🀩

    Liked by 1 person

  4. sunisanthosh
    November 16, 2020

    The look on her face makes me feel so sad !! πŸ’•

    Liked by 1 person

  5. jaquintinwriter
    November 16, 2020

    I can envision the contents of your poem. Well-done!!

    Liked by 2 people

  6. Athira
    November 16, 2020

    You made it Radhika

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Simon
    November 16, 2020

    Reality ✨ Well done πŸ•Ί

    Liked by 2 people

  8. DeepikasRamblings
    November 16, 2020

    Your poetry seems to complement the picture perfectly. Well done Raadhika πŸ‘

    Liked by 1 person

  9. AppophiaM
    November 16, 2020

    urgh, beautifully written!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet
    November 16, 2020

    Your poem expresses a sad situation so effectively. A well-written poem, Radhika πŸ™‚

    Like

  11. V.J. Knutson
    November 16, 2020

    No wonder so many fear intimacy. Sadly, this is a universal theme. Well written, Radhika!

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Thegirlwithapuzzledmind
    November 17, 2020

    Awesome one

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  13. Infinite Living
    November 17, 2020

    You complement the picture with such perfect words! There is sadness yet I sense a power in her eyes and your words.

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  14. This image tells so many stories, and your words are explicit.

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  15. HappySoul
    November 17, 2020

    How do you do this everytime, R!!! So much said in such few words … awesome take and fits in perfectly here.

    Liked by 1 person

  16. -Eugenia
    November 17, 2020

    Wow! Superb take on the prompt, Radhika!

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Silver Stone
    November 17, 2020

    Wow, this poem fits the theme of the picture quite excellently!
    Yet again you’ve managed to surprise us with your creations, R! πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

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  18. Harsh
    November 17, 2020

    Sad but many a times true…

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Indira
    November 17, 2020

    Good take on the prompt, Radhika!

    Liked by 1 person

  20. Subbashini Meenakshi Sundaram
    November 17, 2020

    The feel of the words fits so well with her face, the lose is expressed so well.

    Liked by 1 person

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  22. judeitakali
    November 18, 2020

    I can really see what you wrote in the picture πŸ’œ

    Like

  23. Cozy Quiet Corner
    November 18, 2020

    Superb! ❀️

    Liked by 1 person

  24. michnavs
    November 18, 2020

    sooo short but very powerful…

    Liked by 1 person

  25. Jules
    November 18, 2020

    A crushing blow to sanity. Hoping for recovery… better than actual blows?
    Much expressed in those few words.

    Liked by 1 person

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  27. Susi Bocks
    November 22, 2020

    Wow, Radhika! That is intense.

    Like

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  29. Ramblingswithusha
    November 23, 2020

    Radhika, beautifully and aptly expressed. The look on her face speaks of oppression.

    Liked by 1 person

  30. the dark netizen
    November 25, 2020

    I wish she gets her revenge on whoever caused this!! Well written! πŸ™‚

    Like

  31. Narayan Kaudinya
    November 27, 2020

    looks like life altering, transforming experience. Dark nature, forces are a lot powerful in the shorter run.

    Like

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