
Two tiny angels, hand in hand
dressed pretty, picking posies
dimpled giggles, bubbling laughter
playing naughty pranks
excited over a broken tooth,
sharing half eaten candies
discussing in all seriousness, about their bag of trinkets
frolicking merrily behind meandering butterflies.
Indulging in pure childhood joys,
oblivious of their skin colors,
they revel in a world of happiness with each other,
Until the sentinels of society
grab them with their tainted hands
feed their tender minds with malefic thoughts,
tarnish their naïve souls
with malice against each other.
With time, innocence gradually fades
distancing themselves under myopic racial scoff.
Sadje’s What do you see # 58. Does the above image inspire you to write something?
Beautifully written..kudos ❤
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Thank you Ramya 😊
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Beautiful poem for the given prompt.
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Many thanks Megala
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Your poem is beautiful. The reality is sad but true. Well done, Radhika! ❤
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Thank you Miriam ♥️
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The reality so well written R. The society steals the innocence of a child’s mind
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Sadly it does. Thanks HS!
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That’s great. You have beautifully painted your thoughts in this poem.The reality is reflecting..how discrimination arises with age.
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Thank you so much!
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This is just beautiful❤❤❤
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Thanks Vani ♥️
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Wonderful poem 👍🤝
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Thank you Srikanth 😊
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This is a very beautifully written poem Radhika. Unfortunately it depicts the reality more often than not. Thanks for joining in.
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Yes Sadje, I would like to imagine a world where children continue to carry their purity as they grow. This world would be such a better place to live in.
Enjoyed writing for this beautiful prompt ❤️
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I think it really would be a far better place for us all. Thanks
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This is such a great take, I love how well it depicts the reality!
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Thanks so much dear 💕
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As always, 👌 ✍️
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Thank you my friend 🙏
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Loved how you began it, Radhika. If only we could wish away the harsh reality. Beautifully expressed. ❤️
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Thanks a lot Punam. Why do we taint something so beautiful is a question I always ask myself.
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And sadly there are no answers…
Always a pleasure, Radhika.
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This sad truth is so well conveyed by your poem. I really like the way the rhythm slows towards the end as youthful innocence is tainted.
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Thanks so much Chris. It troubles me a lot at what we do to those pure souls.
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I only the cycle could be broken.
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Yes, we should make that change.
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So awesome, told the beauty of the innocence and ugly of the well grown society.
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Thank you dear Meenakshi ♥️
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This is reality of life. When we are children life is so beautiful and innocent but as we grow up everything changes and we become so bitter. A lovely and wonderful poem, Radhika and the picture was so cute.
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Beautiful poem💖
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Thank you Jalpa!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you Akshita 💙
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Hi Radhika ma’am, I’ve been away for some time and so behind on my reading and writing! I absolutely love this take on the prompt. Such a poignant and powerful piece. 💘
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No worries dear. Happy to see you here though. Thanks a lot Rishika ❤️
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I got immersed in how beautifully you painted their childhood joys and forgot that I had read the perfect title you gave this piece. The sad realty of society too you painted equally beautifully. I truly wish we return all stolen innocence.
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Thank you so much Pragalbha for your kindness. Sadly, we are largely guilty of stealing something priceless from our children.
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Yes we are. You are very welcome.
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Awesome.. Absolute truth.. 👍🏼😊👌🏼
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Thank you Debika ❤️
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Well written!!
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Thank you Remus!
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I want to scream NOOO! Children have so much to teach us.
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Absolutely V.J. They are the perfect ambassadors to make this a beautiful world.
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This is so, so thoughtful and beautifully written.
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Radhika, an absolutely marvelous poem! I especially like the phrase, “sentinels of society.” That is very kind terminology for what they are capable of! Hope all is well with you and your family. ❤
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Thanks so much Cheryl. Yes, quite a dignified way of addressing them, for the tyrant they play. All well here Cheryl. Wishing you a lovely day ❤️
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Wonderfully written Radhika
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Thank you Mich!
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Such beautiful words woven by the innocence and love of children Rahika! It reminds me of my daughter with her friend when she was little.. I’m going to have to post it sometime.. Thanks for the memory! ❤️
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Glad that this brought back nostalgia Cindy. Will look forward to your post. Many thanks 💕
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Me too, it’s always fun to reminisce. Thanks for that. Now I’ll have to remember to post it-:)
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👍🏻😊
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🥰🙏
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Powerful! Very well penned, Radhika
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Reminded of my grand daughter with her friends. How society tarnishes relationships and we call ourselves civilized. Enjoyed reading this lyrical poem.
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Beautiful piece… 👏🏾
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Thank you Henry 😊
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Lovely poem Radhika, depicting the cruel reality of this world which kills the basic nature of humanity.
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