
Endearing moments, amorous feelings
romantic hearts seal, a promise of “ and forever…”
Rendezvous under the silky darkness
whisper echoes of sweet nothings
stoking the flame of frenzy,
whorls of scarlet emotions flow.
Heady tangled intoxication
tastes the elixir of passion.
The morning zephyr
blows the embers of rhapsody
only the charred remains linger.
Her naïve heart,
misread his illegible scribbles, for love.
Broken dreams scatter into oblivion
teary eyes blur the memory of intimacy
painful scars etched, heartbroken,
her vulnerability is there for all to see.
Such is life …
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Sadly sometimes it is…
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I love the crescendo of emotions… and then, oh, the heartbreak. Well done, Radhika!
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Thank you Chris!
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Sad but you’ve beautifully penned it, Radhika✨✍️
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Shruthi, thanks!!
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✨😇
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Very beautifully penned👏👏👏
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Thanks Vani 💜
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You’ve build up the emotions do well Radhika. Heart break in the end, which started with ecstasy!
Thanks for joining in with this very poignant poem
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Thank you Sadje. Life is such at times.
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You’re welcome! Very true.
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This is so beautiful ❤❤❤
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Thanks Ramya ❣️
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The romantic con! I know I’ve certainly been there. Well written.
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Aww…it’s heartbreaking to be there. Thank you V.J.
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Welcome!
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watch her walk
do not talk
less spoken to
the door is closed
and you know
it is her time
to be free
truly
of all chains
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The pain of lost love…beautifully expressed, Radhika!
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Thank you Indira
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Wow, Radhika what a beautiful poem. So much depth and pain of what she went through. A great challenge taken.
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Thank you Kamal. Being cheated in love is like the world coming crashing down. Some find it very difficult to come out of it.
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Yes absolutely true Radhika some really find it very difficult to come out from such wounds. Always welcome.
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You are a fantastic writer, capture all the emotions beautifully
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Gratitude Meenakshi 💖
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Heartbreaking, yes. Beautifully described, yes.
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Aishwarya, many thanks!!
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Nicely expressed😊❤️
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Thanks Olivia ❤️
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This poem is deep and very emotional. I love the way you expressed everything, I can almost feel the pain.
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Glad you felt the words. Thank you so much!!
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Radikha, your poem empathetically tells an old, sad story! Amazing! ❤ All the best!
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Thanks Cheryl. Indeed a sad story.
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Deep emotions so beautifully conveyed, you express amazingly in poetry!
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Thanks for your kind words Pragalbha
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Meticulous poetry expressing deep emotions of joy and pain! I totally enjoyed this.
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Thanks so much Anisha
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Beautiful and intense poem.
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Thank you Sowmya
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Beautiful and very much my own thoughts🧡
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Thank you Jude
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My pleasure
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Aaah this hurt the heart. What a poignant poem. Tale captured so well by your words.
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Thank you Pallavi
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Poignant, emotions of a heartbreak are beautifully conveyed. You have a way with words!
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Thank you for your kind words Yasmin 🙏
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Ahhhh so sad..
But beautifully written..
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🙏🙏
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Sad and relatable. 😦 Very well written!
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‘Rendezvous under the silky darkness’
Loved the line. Can feel the heaviness of the heart.
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