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Cheated in Love…

Endearing moments, amorous feelings

romantic hearts seal, a promise of “ and forever…”

Rendezvous under the silky darkness

 whisper echoes of sweet nothings

stoking the flame of frenzy,

 whorls of scarlet emotions flow.

Heady tangled intoxication

tastes the elixir of passion.

The morning zephyr

blows the embers of rhapsody

 only the charred remains linger.

Her naïve heart,

misread his illegible scribbles, for love.

Broken dreams scatter into oblivion

teary eyes blur the memory of intimacy

painful scars etched, heartbroken,

her vulnerability is there for all to see.

Sadje’s What do you see #72

V. J’s weekly challenge : Con

53 comments on “Cheated in Love…

  1. ashok
    March 9, 2021

    Such is life …

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Chris Hall
    March 9, 2021

    I love the crescendo of emotions… and then, oh, the heartbreak. Well done, Radhika!

    Liked by 2 people

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  4. Nathi
    March 9, 2021

    Sad but you’ve beautifully penned it, Radhika✨✍️

    Liked by 2 people

  5. vaniheart
    March 9, 2021

    Very beautifully penned👏👏👏

    Liked by 2 people

  6. Sadje
    March 9, 2021

    You’ve build up the emotions do well Radhika. Heart break in the end, which started with ecstasy!
    Thanks for joining in with this very poignant poem

    Liked by 2 people

  7. Ramya Vivek
    March 9, 2021

    This is so beautiful ❤❤❤

    Liked by 2 people

  8. V.J. Knutson
    March 9, 2021

    The romantic con! I know I’ve certainly been there. Well written.

    Liked by 2 people

  9. utahan15
    March 9, 2021

    watch her walk
    do not talk
    less spoken to
    the door is closed
    and you know
    it is her time
    to be free
    truly
    of all chains

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Indira
    March 9, 2021

    The pain of lost love…beautifully expressed, Radhika!

    Liked by 2 people

  11. boundlessblessingsblog
    March 9, 2021

    Wow, Radhika what a beautiful poem. So much depth and pain of what she went through. A great challenge taken.

    Liked by 2 people

    • radhikasreflection
      March 10, 2021

      Thank you Kamal. Being cheated in love is like the world coming crashing down. Some find it very difficult to come out of it.

      Liked by 1 person

      • boundlessblessingsblog
        March 10, 2021

        Yes absolutely true Radhika some really find it very difficult to come out from such wounds. Always welcome.

        Liked by 2 people

  12. You are a fantastic writer, capture all the emotions beautifully

    Liked by 2 people

  13. kittysverses
    March 9, 2021

    Heartbreaking, yes. Beautifully described, yes.

    Liked by 2 people

  14. Olivia Ava
    March 9, 2021

    Nicely expressed😊❤️

    Liked by 2 people

  15. tndos
    March 9, 2021

    This poem is deep and very emotional. I love the way you expressed everything, I can almost feel the pain.

    Liked by 2 people

  16. Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet
    March 9, 2021

    Radikha, your poem empathetically tells an old, sad story! Amazing! ❤ All the best!

    Liked by 2 people

  17. Infinite Living
    March 9, 2021

    Deep emotions so beautifully conveyed, you express amazingly in poetry!

    Liked by 2 people

  18. Anisha @crazienerds
    March 10, 2021

    Meticulous poetry expressing deep emotions of joy and pain! I totally enjoyed this.

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Sowmya
    March 10, 2021

    Beautiful and intense poem.

    Liked by 2 people

  20. judeitakali
    March 11, 2021

    Beautiful and very much my own thoughts🧡

    Liked by 2 people

  21. Pallavi
    March 11, 2021

    Aaah this hurt the heart. What a poignant poem. Tale captured so well by your words.

    Liked by 2 people

  22. Yasmin
    March 12, 2021

    Poignant, emotions of a heartbreak are beautifully conveyed. You have a way with words!

    Liked by 2 people

  23. michnavs
    March 13, 2021

    Ahhhh so sad..

    But beautifully written..

    Liked by 2 people

  24. Benjamin Grossman
    March 14, 2021

    Sad and relatable. 😦 Very well written!

    Like

  25. Kritika
    March 14, 2021

    ‘Rendezvous under the silky darkness’
    Loved the line. Can feel the heaviness of the heart.

    Like

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