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Etching Our Destiny!

Image credit; Andrew Morris @ Unsplash

The ruby sun readies to dip

into the shimmering waters,

Horizon curls into a speckled band

as twilight kisses it,

The panoramic seascape changes color as

the saline breeze whispers softly

Gentle darkness descends to the rhythm of

the receding tide

The glowing luna enters the timeless expanse

of star studded sky.

We walk hand in hand watching the ebbing

waves wane our footprints,

The tangerine glow of the fairy lights

sets a perfect ambiance

As we etch our dreamy destiny of togetherness

in the fragile sands of time.

Sadje’s WDYS #77

80 comments on “Etching Our Destiny!

  1. Sadje
    April 12, 2021

    Powerful poetry. I love how you drew the scene with your words. Thanks Radhika for joining in

    Liked by 7 people

  2. V.J. Knutson
    April 12, 2021

    Such beautiful description.

    Liked by 8 people

  3. Indira
    April 12, 2021

    Great imagery , Radhika! Indeed…sunsets are romantic 🙂

    Liked by 7 people

  4. Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet
    April 12, 2021

    Vivid images in your lovely poem, Radhika! I would so like to visit the place you have described! ❤ Stay safe and be happy! 🙂

    Liked by 5 people

    • radhikasreflection
      April 13, 2021

      Happy to read your comment Cheryl. Ah yes, I am sure a walk at such a beautiful beach by the dusk would be wonderful ❤️❤️ thanks!!

      Liked by 2 people

  5. boundlessblessingsblog
    April 12, 2021

    Wow a wonderful piece of poetry, Radhika. Wandering on the sands of time, hand in hand with the one I love.

    Liked by 6 people

  6. Nawazish
    April 12, 2021

    Beautiful description

    Liked by 6 people

  7. The Typewriter
    April 12, 2021

    Such a blissful read dear.. Bold and beautiful.. 😇💕👌🏻

    Liked by 7 people

  8. utahan15
    April 12, 2021

    red rosed gem
    the stem of a BLUE saphhire
    to conspire
    to shadow the depths of ya love~

    Liked by 4 people

  9. Sowmya
    April 12, 2021

    Beautiful

    Liked by 4 people

  10. Athira
    April 12, 2021

    Most welcome!

    Liked by 3 people

  11. HappySoul
    April 12, 2021

    Beautiful R .. ❤️😍

    Liked by 5 people

  12. Junie-Jesh
    April 12, 2021

    This is Junie-Jesh from All Seasons! Can’t figure out why, but your link this week does not work out. I tried to copy and paste if (the puzzle and castle and Paul Klee one), but I still couldn’t reach your post. Sorry! Hope you see this, and maybe try again to leave a ping back or perma link? Thanks so much! Jesh

    Liked by 6 people

  13. Athira
    April 12, 2021

    Beautifully written👌🏻👍🏻

    Liked by 3 people

  14. michnavs
    April 12, 2021

    whoa…. i love the imagery Radhika… so beautiful..

    Liked by 7 people

  15. ashok
    April 12, 2021

    So beautiful Radhika 😍

    Liked by 3 people

  16. Thegirlwithapuzzledmind
    April 12, 2021

    The imagery that you created with your words is beautiful here Radhika.

    Liked by 7 people

  17. You gave wonderful feel through your words ma’am, still in that place.

    Liked by 4 people

  18. Deb
    April 12, 2021

    How beautiful is that imagery Radhika, great poem! This is triggering my vacation impulses again 🙂

    I would love to be marooned on a private island with my family and with lots of provisions and nice food and a nice beach side house and no Covid carrying crowd or WiFi.
    Walk the silver sands, watch the beautiful sunrise, sunset and moonlight on the shining waters – bliss!

    Liked by 7 people

    • radhikasreflection
      April 12, 2021

      Aha… That would be absolute bliss Deb. Jaane woh din kab aayega, when we are free from the virus. Anyways till then, let’s dream on, to be on that beautiful beach 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  19. Chris Hall
    April 12, 2021

    The shape of the poem reflects the waves coming in and going out. You’ve taken me there with your wonderful words… and I’m wandering along the sand, hand in hand… such peace 🙂 Love it, Radhika!

    Liked by 7 people

  20. DeepikasRamblings
    April 12, 2021

    Wow, what wonderful imagination, Radhika. It will be splendid to have such a beautiful time with family 💞💞

    Liked by 7 people

  21. Rishika Jain
    April 12, 2021

    Amazing ❤️🥺

    Liked by 6 people

  22. Infinite Living
    April 12, 2021

    Absolute beautiful feeling to be with your words :))

    Liked by 3 people

  23. Cindy Georgakas
    April 13, 2021

    What a beautiful reflection of the sands of time you capture and deliver so well Radhika!
    Nice to see you!
    It’s been awhile!
    💖

    Liked by 4 people

  24. Radhika, I just love your words, they are really spoken out of your beautiful heart.

    Liked by 5 people

  25. akshita1776
    April 13, 2021

    Oh how beautiful the imagery is! This stole my heart 🤩

    Liked by 4 people

  26. Moushmi Radhanpara
    April 13, 2021

    Such beautiful description, so much power in your words.

    Liked by 8 people

  27. Krishna
    April 13, 2021

    Beautiful poem 🙂 ❤️

    Liked by 6 people

  28. Olivia Ava
    April 13, 2021

    Beautiful Writing🧡

    Liked by 6 people

  29. Tomrebro
    April 13, 2021

    Love the message of togetherness

    Liked by 6 people

  30. judeitakali
    April 14, 2021

    This is amazing Radhika.

    Liked by 4 people

  31. Bette A. Stevens
    April 14, 2021

    Lovely, Radhika.

    Liked by 6 people

  32. Kritika
    April 14, 2021

    The perfect ending,
    ‘As we etch our dreamy destiny of togetherness
    in the fragile sands of time.
    I can actually feel your words. Love it.

    Liked by 3 people

  33. Benjamin Grossman
    April 14, 2021

    In love with that opening. This one is filled with a lot of perfect images.

    Liked by 2 people

  34. cdattatraya
    April 15, 2021

    ‘ dreamy destiny, will be there, in the
    ” Green Giants of happy moments!

    Liked by 5 people

  35. Awesh Kumar
    April 15, 2021

    Wow!!

    Liked by 6 people

  36. b83dp
    April 16, 2021

    Beautiful

    Liked by 4 people

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  38. Umi Aimen Kundangar
    April 19, 2021

    You have expressed it so beautifully…

    Liked by 3 people

  39. Umi Aimen Kundangar
    April 19, 2021

    My Pleasure 😊

    Liked by 2 people

  40. Crystal Pearson
    April 22, 2021

    Beautiful

    Liked by 3 people

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