
The warm breeze carries moist salinity of the endless sea,
the hues of the receding sun begins its final dance across the horizon,
choreographing each movement with graceful swirls.
As dusk ambles across the skyline with a sublime gait
leaving a trail of scarlet dreams,
I sit by the shore watching this celestial spectacle unfold.
Just as the broody clouds pale against its luminous crimson glow
my stress from the chaotic day releases,
bringing an untold sense of calm to my weary mind.
Sadje’s WDYS #99
Magnificent poem, Mam! That would be a stress-relieving experience, indeed. ☺️
How you poeticise every sight, every sound, every atom of existence is ever a wonder to me…
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In the lap of nature is where man finds solace….so I believe. Guess that feeling flows to my words. Many thanks dear Sahana for all the love you shower on my work ,😊❤️🙏
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Stress relieving poetry
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Thanks N!
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Enthralling words soothes the mind in perpetual battle, Radhika. I mean, mine Your words exudes so much of peace and going with the flow. Simply superb.
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Thanks so much Vishal. Nature to me always has been therapeutic. Have a lovely day!!
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Such peaceful, calming words, Radhika, lovely! My favourite line: ‘leaving a trail of scarlet dreams…’ Mmm♥
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Thanks dear Chris. Ah! I love that line too 😊❤️
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Thanks so much David for the reblog 🙏
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Wonderful, Radhika! May peace descend on all! ❤️
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Amen! Thanks Punam ❤️
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My pleasure.
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It would be amazing to have such a beautiful view to make you forgot all your stress and worries. Beautifully written, my dear ❤️
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Ah yes Shweta. That view is simply magical. Many thanks dear. How have you been?
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Indeed. You’re most welcome, dear. I’m good. I’ve been on a break from blogging
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These words read/feel like a meditation Radhika. This poem is beautifully woven, with such descriptive words “leaving a trail of scarlet dreams” I have read it over three times.
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Aww …your feedback back brings so much joy to me Bree. Many a time watching nature’s surreal beauty puts the mind in a trance, isn’t it?
Many thanks dear for your kind words.
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It’s a wonderful piece Radhika and yes… I also find nature extremely healing.
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magnificent poem
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Thanks Tanvir!
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Such a beautiful description of the sea bringing respite in color and hues Radhika! Great picture with your words-:)💕🥰
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Thanks a lot dear Cindy ❤️
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It’s always my pleasure 💖💖 my friend❣️
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seventh son
the only one
by the see
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Oh my! Wish I could join you to release my stress too. Beautiful imagery dear Radhika. ❣️❣️
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Always welcome dear Preeths. Thanks a bunch 💖
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Beautiful!
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Thank you V.J
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My pleasure
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To sit in this tranquil place and be at peace within. What else do you wish for. Excellent poem, Radhika.
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Exactly, it would be so lovely if one could do that often. Thanks Kamal!
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Yes so true. Most welcome Radhika 😊❤️❤️
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Celestial spectacle indeed
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Thank you Satish
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Gorgeous imagery and serene and soothing poem, Radhika. ❤
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Thank you Cheryl ❤ !
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ohhhh Radhika, this gave me a very peaceful vibe…
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Thanks dear Mich 🙂
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Beautiful, Radhika. Your words create a lasting image and memory of peace and tranquillity. I adore the ocean. 💙
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Thanks a lot Jeff. Oh yes, the endless expanse of the ocean is always magical!
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A lovely poem Radhika.
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Thanks Rupali
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Nature always has its own way of calming us and you have so gracefully presented the same. Wonderful poetry Radhika.
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Thank you so much. Nature indeed has abundant healing and calming effect on the mind.
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What a beautiful composure with your words capturing the essence and gifts of the ocean Radihika!💖
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Many thanks Cindy 💖
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You’re always welcome Radhika!
❤️💕
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Am craving some vitamin-sea after reading this 🏖️💓
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Haha! That’s a good one G. Thanks 🙂
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This is such a beautiful and calming poem Radhika! I’m sorry I completely missed your post. Thanks for joining in
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No worries Sadje. Thanks so much. Have a lovely week ahead 🙂
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Thank you so much my friend
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In the midst of nature, always a pleasure. Description aptly worded. Loved it.
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I agree Usha. Thanks so much!
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My gain, cause I get to read your lovely writings. You are welcome.
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Much humbled Usha. Thanks again 🙂
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Peaceful. 💙
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Thank you Shreya 💙
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Beautiful, Radhika! 🙂
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Thank you Susi
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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” the hues of the receding sun begins its final dance across the horizon,
choreographing each movement with graceful swirls.”
Amazing lines!!!
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Thanks a lot Shivani!
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Such soothing beautiful poem and feeling.
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Thank you Pragalbha
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