
The pandemic locked us up with our gadgets, turning life into virtual reality. As the undulating waves of the virus ebbed, we decided to get out of home. “No gadgets!” shrieked my friend and added, “Bring no book, for this one day we’ll give to the idleness!” We drove on without a destination in mind.
A couple of hours later, we found ourselves in a cloister canopied under a dense vegetation. Alighting, we walked on the muddy trail. The lazy afternoon sun crowned the blades of the tall grass. Piquant organic scents aroused our olfactory senses. We lay there, on the earthy bosom looking at the yonder beyond without a sense of time. The horizon tinged to a mellow tangerine, before melding into inkiness. We were glad, that we breached the confines of the mundane, to be on a date with indolence, fully rejuvenated!
Word count :144
This week Ingrid from dVerse Prosery, challenges us to write a piece of prose in 144 words ,using some given lines of poetry. The prompt lines have been taken from Wordsworth’s poem, Lines Written at a Small Distance from my House:
And bring no book, for this one day
We’ll give to idleness.
Soul-stirring and idyllic.
Loved this exceptionally curated piece, Radhika.
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Thank you Natasha!
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Wow, superb writing, Radhika 👌
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Thank you Deepika ❤️
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Wow Radhika so nice to be with nature and be at ease and peace. Lovely poem.
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Yes Kamal. Nature always energises. Thanks so much!
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Yes absolutely true Radhika. Always welcome dear 💞💞
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Awesome post having beautiful words presented in such beautiful manner.
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Thanks a lot Shobhnaa!
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Beautiful writing, Ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks Aishwarya
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your writing is like a painting……a work of art
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Thank you 🙏
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What a wonderful way to rejuvenate, Radhika!
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Thanks Ingrid
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Radhika, your imagery is simply stunning.
❤
David
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Thanks a lot David 🤗
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After a lockdown it sounds perfect without gadgets or books… finding a perfect little adveture.
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Oh yes, it sure does. Thanks Björn.
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I enjoyed this magical transportation in to another world of being, you said it beautifully – we breached the confines of the mundane. Wonderful use of the prompt, I always say you are the best at this 🙂
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Appreciate your ever so thoughtful and encouraging feedback Pragalbha. Thanks a lot 😊
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You are vrey welcome Radhika 🙂
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Aahhh so refreshing….. would love a day of idleness too
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Me too Vani. Thanks 😊
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I really loved what you have written 👏👏
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Thank you Raima 😇
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Sounds like a lovely way to spend a day.
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Absolutely Patricia 👍🏻🤗
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Beautiful!
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Thanks Rupali
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What a wonderful way to rejuvenate and energize. Well crafted Radhika
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Thank you Sowmya
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Your words are such poetic beauty Radhika!!!
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Thank you Cindy 💖
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You’re most welcome!
❤️
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Oh to be rid of gadgets, if only for a while! Wonderful writing, Radhika . ❤️
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Thank you Punam ❤️
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My pleasure. 😊
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When you feel the magic of nature you live in the moment, you detach yourself from past n future ., The moments which make you truly live. wonderfully written…
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Absolutely Piyush. Thanks so much!
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Wonderful writing!!!
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We were glad, that we breached the confines of the mundane, to be on a date with indolence, fully rejuvenated!
Beautiful.. 👍🏼😇👌🏼👌🏼🤗💕
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Gratitude Debika 💕😊
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