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Sidlak Poetry : Dawn

sunrays

                                                                   A new dawn

                                                         beckons us each morn

                                                       Radiant rays weave magic

                                                 Glistening all that it touches, to

                                                                      A golden hue.

Thank you Shambhavi for introducing this form of poetry !

Know Sidlak:

Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.

 

 

 

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72 comments on “Sidlak Poetry : Dawn

  1. Amitav Chowdhury
    July 21, 2016

    Really beautiful. Love this line- ‘ Radiant rays weave magic’.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Karthik
    July 21, 2016

    A radiant poem…invigorating…its radiance captured in “Gold”

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  3. Subhash
    July 21, 2016

    Very nice written, short and sweet and makes an impression, thank you for introducing this form to me 🙂

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  4. healthyindiankitchen
    July 21, 2016

    Radhika that’s a lovely poetry. Thanks for introducing us to a new form of poetry. It just takes creative writing to an all new level😃

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Kumar Harsh
    July 21, 2016

    This was beautifully written.

    Like

  6. Kumar Harsh
    July 21, 2016

    Beautifully written Ma’am. ☺️

    Like

  7. Sayanti aka Shine
    July 21, 2016

    Wow, a great form of poetry and you have written it very nicely. Syllables are maintained, properly with the lovely words .

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  8. Kumar Harsh
    July 21, 2016

    This was written beautifully.

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  9. kiranmag
    July 21, 2016

    Thats awesome with beautiful combination of words.. i felt like it was morning though i read this post in the evening

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  10. shambhavi31
    July 21, 2016

    Vibrant and beautiful one!
    Lovely Sidlak dear. I’m happy to read this one, this piece is surrounded by vibes of positivity .🤗🤗😇😇

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  11. mywords331
    July 21, 2016

    Wonderful….

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  12. meetruchisharma
    July 21, 2016

    What lovely words you chose to describe the dawn Radhika….loved it completely 😍

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  13. pins & ashes
    July 21, 2016

    the feeling is so transparent and it come and hits the reader in me, Radhika. Yes, Sambhavi first and now you, wonder who will take it up next..

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  14. Beautiful words ensuring the beginning of a new dawn, full of propitious rays and positivity… 🙂

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  15. writeshefali
    July 21, 2016

    wonderful lines :)… n yes thanks to you learned something new in poetry 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  16. healthyindiankitchen
    July 22, 2016

    Hello Radhika, I would like to let you know that I have nomination you for 3 Day Quote challenge. Please check this out if you want to do it. Happy blogging!:)
    https://healthyindiankitchen.wordpress.com/2016/07/22/3-day-quote-challenge/

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  17. chahnaahuja
    July 25, 2016

    Hi! Ma’am your writing is fabulous especially this new form of literature…
    Would love to read your works….
    Your words weave miracles and dreams…
    Looking forward to read more from you….
    Keep writing..
    Stay blessed…
    CHAHNA

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    • radhikasreflection
      July 25, 2016

      I am glad Chahna that that you enjoyed reading my work. The feedback of the readers is the biggest motivation for me to keep writing. So keep them coming. Enjoy your day😊 Thanks once again.

      Liked by 1 person

  18. myheartbeats4ublog
    July 28, 2016

    beautiful choice of words. nice poem!

    Liked by 1 person

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