Down you fall
from the canvas above
kissing the earth with passion
embracing the parched souls with nectar
carpeting the stage green, for life to dance!!
Know Sidlak:
Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.
radhikasreflection 
I loved the imagery . Green carpet for life to dance ! Reminded me of Mahabaleshwar …..This post makes me miss the rain . It has been dry for a few days now in Bombay , the green carpets are slowly changing colour. Have a lovely day Radhika .
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Thanks Pri. The rains have stopped here also. But so far the carpet has still managed to retain its green colour 😊😊
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Lucky you !
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🙂 🙂
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Lovely and the colour green signifies nature and the red roses and leaves enriched with the rain drops look spctacular..
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Many thanks Sunita😊
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Wow Radhika. I must tell u that u r trying new ways of writing. And that’s how a writer grows . and this is beautiful too.
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Thank you Supreet for those beautiful words of encouragement!
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Ur posts are always delightful.. Punch them if someone tells u u r a novice
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Haha!!! That’s really sweet of you 😊
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beautiful Radhika…… those words are lovely….
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Thank you so much Sudhir!!
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😃😃😃
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tiny phenomena and expressed poetically, thanks for the info on Sidlak 🙂
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Most welcome Elaine!
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Beautiful and lively thought close to nature👏👌
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Thank you Prashant!
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Your welcome:)
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😊😊
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superb Radhi..
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Thanks Akhila😊😊
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The last line takes it away! 🙂
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Thank you Sudhanshu !!
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Beautiful! Loved the pic. ☺👌
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Thanks Varsha😊
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lovely pic, excellent lines..cheers, radhika
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Thank you Hari!!
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Ah very beautiful Radhika…green carpet indeed!:-)
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Many thanks Divya😊
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From canvas above… for life to dance…. ❤️❤️❤️what lovely n meaningful lines… loved it 👍🏼👌🏼
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I am glad you liked it Shefali. Thanks so much😊
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Thank You for introducing sidelak poetry! What an imagination you have!! Beautiful description!! Loved it 💖
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I too learnt about sidlak from a blogger friend. It’s truly beautiful. Thank you Meenakshi 💛💚
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Truely refreshing Radhika!!
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Rains refreshes everything around us. Thanks Pranitha 😊
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Wow. Wow. Wow! That shot is awesome 🙂
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Thank you!
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Loved it!! The picture and the poem:)
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Thank you Sumith!
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Dekho Baarish ho rahi hain…..Rains have a relaxing effect on the brains… and so did your Sid/Lak poem 🙂
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Thank you …… rains always manage to inspire people !
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Very beautiful ….loved reading it 🙂
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Glad that you liked it Rohit, thanks!!
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