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Everyday musings ….Life as I see it…….my space, my reflections and thoughts !!

Sidlak # 4- Rain

red_tulips_in_the_rain-preview

Down you fall

from the canvas above

kissing the earth with passion

embracing the parched souls with nectar

carpeting the stage green, for life to dance!!

 

Know Sidlak:

Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.

 

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43 comments on “Sidlak # 4- Rain

  1. thatmishmash
    October 14, 2016

    I loved the imagery . Green carpet for life to dance ! Reminded me of Mahabaleshwar …..This post makes me miss the rain . It has been dry for a few days now in Bombay , the green carpets are slowly changing colour. Have a lovely day Radhika .

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  2. adsunsri
    October 14, 2016

    Lovely and the colour green signifies nature and the red roses and leaves enriched with the rain drops look spctacular..

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  3. theonlysup
    October 14, 2016

    Wow Radhika. I must tell u that u r trying new ways of writing. And that’s how a writer grows . and this is beautiful too.

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  4. Sudhir Chauhan
    October 14, 2016

    beautiful Radhika…… those words are lovely….

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  5. elaine
    October 14, 2016

    tiny phenomena and expressed poetically, thanks for the info on Sidlak πŸ™‚

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  6. prashantt
    October 14, 2016

    Beautiful and lively thought close to natureπŸ‘πŸ‘Œ

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  7. Akhila
    October 14, 2016

    superb Radhi..

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  8. The Bard
    October 14, 2016

    The last line takes it away! πŸ™‚

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  9. Varsh
    October 14, 2016

    Beautiful! Loved the pic. β˜ΊπŸ‘Œ

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  10. myheartbeats4ublog
    October 14, 2016

    lovely pic, excellent lines..cheers, radhika

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  11. Divya Deepak Rao
    October 14, 2016

    Ah very beautiful Radhika…green carpet indeed!:-)

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  12. writeshefali
    October 14, 2016

    From canvas above… for life to dance…. ❀️❀️❀️what lovely n meaningful lines… loved it πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘ŒπŸΌ

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  13. Meenakshi Sethi
    October 15, 2016

    Thank You for introducing sidelak poetry! What an imagination you have!! Beautiful description!! Loved it πŸ’–

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    • radhikasreflection
      October 15, 2016

      I too learnt about sidlak from a blogger friend. It’s truly beautiful. Thank you Meenakshi πŸ’›πŸ’š

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  14. thewritewomanblog
    October 16, 2016

    Truely refreshing Radhika!!

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  15. @sean
    October 16, 2016

    Wow. Wow. Wow! That shot is awesome πŸ™‚

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  16. Sumith Babu
    October 19, 2016

    Loved it!! The picture and the poem:)

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  17. Karthik
    October 19, 2016

    Dekho Baarish ho rahi hain…..Rains have a relaxing effect on the brains… and so did your Sid/Lak poem πŸ™‚

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  18. Rohit Nag
    October 23, 2016

    Very beautiful ….loved reading it πŸ™‚

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