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Love at first sight!

In response to secretkeeper.nets prompt # 159, to write a poem/fiction using the 5 prompt words!

WAY|PINE|CONFESS|NAME|PARCHED

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The gloomy dreary morning,

predicted another dull day at work

until you walked in,

bringing in a swirl of sunshine

your dazzling smile

froze my heart beat

the scent of the wild springs

filling my heart with desires,

sanity seemed to have lost its way

in an impassioned labyrinth

your name conjured strange sensations in me

untamed like a wildfire,

the parched soul pined to hold on to you,

feel the warmth of your touch,

to drown in your beauty forever,

I must confess, it was love at first sight!

56 comments on “Love at first sight!

  1. Accidental Blogger
    September 17, 2018

    Lovely❀

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Kunal Thakore
    September 17, 2018

    Wah! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Megha's World
    September 17, 2018

    Aha, the beauty of love and what that glance can do the beating heart has been so beautifully penned.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. balroop2013
    September 17, 2018

    Well articulated first love! Radhika, your approach to the prompt words is perfect as they flow naturally and are loaded.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Infinite Living
    September 17, 2018

    You truly use prompt words amazingly well πŸ™‚ Beautiful how you painted the feeling of first love in words!

    Liked by 2 people

  6. ~H@rdip~
    September 17, 2018

    Lovely readπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ’ž

    Liked by 1 person

  7. krishnapriya108
    September 17, 2018

    This is absolutely beautiful – the poetry itself, but even more precious for the way you wove those chosen words in it. Bravo! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  8. swalia
    September 18, 2018

    How exciting it would be to go to work if you have someone there who makes your heart skip a beat!! So beautifully penned!!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Indira
    September 18, 2018

    Beautiful…enjoyed reading it πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  10. DeepikasRamblings
    September 18, 2018

    Just beautiful πŸ’•

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Dahlia
    September 18, 2018

    Lovely smooth flow to this piece

    Liked by 1 person

  12. boundlessblessingsblog
    September 18, 2018

    Fantastic poetry, Radhika and the ending lines were so beautiful it felt the whole poem was in those two stanzas. Simplicity and tenderness in the picture too. Lovely.

    Liked by 2 people

  13. Ritwik
    September 18, 2018

    I can’t stop reading this beautiful piece, again and again. The imagery the words create pulls me under… Lovely!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Kurian
    September 18, 2018

    Love at first sight, always the best

    Liked by 1 person

  15. beingalive
    September 18, 2018

    so well portrayed.. just like beauty forever

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Neha Sharma
    September 18, 2018

    Such a lovely poem πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Subbashini Meenakshi Sundaram
    September 19, 2018

    Feel happy to read your lovely posts ma’am.

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      September 19, 2018

      Thanks so much Meenakshi. Good to see you back after a long time. Hope you are doing good!

      Like

  18. The Typewriter
    September 19, 2018

    πŸ’πŸ˜‡

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Shantanu Baruah
    September 20, 2018

    So so beautiful ❀️

    Liked by 1 person

  20. daneelyunus
    September 24, 2018

    Very nice poem Radhika

    Liked by 1 person

  21. iScriblr
    September 25, 2018

    So beautiful!❀

    Liked by 1 person

  22. thewritewomanblog
    September 26, 2018

    A perfect definition for the words – love at first sight.

    Liked by 1 person

  23. Sifar
    November 18, 2018

    So this is how it feels! I get it now!! πŸ˜„

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      November 19, 2018

      Haha! I hope I get to read your poem about your experience on that. Good luck friend πŸ‘πŸ’™

      Liked by 1 person

      • Sifar
        November 19, 2018

        Haha….sure once I experience it I will write about it…till then bear my sad poems πŸ˜‚

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