In response to Helene’s What do you see Challenge?
Within the confines of my body
hounded by insecurities
I suffocate, struggle, stagnate
captive in the fortress of my mind.
In isolation I fight the avalanche of thoughts
absorbing the tremors of after effect.
The reverberations distinctly audible
in the empty silence of the soul.
The clock traverses its path
in moments of reflection ,
I unlearn and clear the cocoons.
The cloak of tangled mess drops,
metamorphosis happens.
The puzzles of the jigsaw of life
fall into place
completing a beautiful picture of
Transformation!
A marvel of its kind Radhika.. so so well done.. amazing.. exquisite.. 👍🏼😊👒👌🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Thank you for sharing.. 😇💕
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Appreciate your kind words Debi. Thanks a ton 😇❤️🙏
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Always a pleasure Radhika.. 😇💕
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Beautifully inked
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Thank you Muntazir!
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You always pen such magnificent words with rare elan and effortlessness. Flawless thoughts translated into words.
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Humbled Vishal. Thank you very much !!
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Beautifully penned Radhika
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Thanks Tanvir!
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Wow ……. I’d say this is one of my favorites from you❤️
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Happy to hear that Sakshi. Thanks so much ❤️
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Most welcome 😊
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Stunning and what a marvelous way of transformation, Radhika. The poem was awesome and the picture said it all.
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Such magnificent transformation. You wrote this with such clarity that I felt each and every line, experiencing the process through your words up until the very end finally reaching transformation.
Excellent piece Radhika.
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Thanks so much Hélène. The picture is just so brilliant. I enjoyed writing this one ❤️
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So glad you added your delightful poem to the challenge, thank you.
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Absolutely my pleasure Hélène ❣️
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Oh wow, this was simply wonderful!!
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Many thanks Moushumi 🙂
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Nice write up and beautiful flow of words👍
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Thank you Jyo 🙂
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The theme is well brought out through your lines, Radhika!!
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Thanks Indira 🙂
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Beautifully penned 💝😇
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Thanks Anjali 💖
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You’re welcome 💝🙏🏻😇
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Powerful, profound, and beautifully expressed.
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Thanks a lot Drew!
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This is brilliantly written! Beautiful!❤️
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Many thanks dear Richa 🙂
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The photo and the your words offer such a wonderful description of the process of transformation – absolutely beautifully done.
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Thank you so much Pragalbha!
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Absolutely stunning, the way to transform
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Thank you Shantanu 🙂
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My pleasure
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Wow! Awesome! i enjoyed reading it particularly this phrase, “absorbing the tremors of after effect”.
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Glad you enjoyed this Megala. Thanks so much 🙂
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wow radhika…so intricately written… i actually felt the metamorphosis from a caterpillar into a butterfly…you really have a way with words!!!!
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Aww…so very kind of you my friend. Thanks a lot 😇
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Very nice…
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Wonderful response
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Happy to hear that. Thanks Tanu!
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You are most welcome dear…
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Life said in very deep and beautiful way 👏👏👏
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Thank you Meenakshi 💖
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Radhika ji, You have a knack of producing such fine writings that too with ease and frequently. Good Job!
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Appreciate your kind words Abhay. Many thanks for this encouragement 🙏
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Beautiful words!!
“The reverberations distinctly audible
in the empty silence of the soul.”
Loved this line!! ❤️
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Thanks so much Sifar.
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Wow Radhika, so powerful, thanks for sharing!!!
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Glad you liked it Paulo. Thanks so much!
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Yes, a poem about how we struggle and evolve, love this.
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Thank you Paul!
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Most welcome Radhika
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What actually happens in the mind distinctively described and the need for Transformation felt.
Bringing it into Poetry form is not everyone’s talent Radhika.
I endorse this thought and recommend it for anybody’s Transformation.
Shiva
💞🙏
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What a lovely feedback Shiva. Truly appreciate it ❣️
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Exquisite ❤️….. .. I don’t think I can express how beautiful this is!
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this is beautiful, transformation and evolution
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Thanks a lot!
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Beautifully said Radhika. 🌺
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Thank you Kavitha!
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