The doctor had given up all hope on her ailing child. The mother brought her son out for dinner, probably their last meal together!
Wc: 133 characters
In response to Twiterring tale # 35, hosted by Kat of katmyrman.com . Tell a story on the given prompt in 140 characters or less.
A touching story. It makes me shudder to think of the end. Love and attachment can be very tricky.
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Yes Vishal. It is devastating.
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Sometimes I wonder on life and death, news that one keep hearing. My next post will be related to that and the need for us to be happy, enjoying every second.
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Life is so unpredictable. So always look out for those small joys and happiness in daily life.
Looking forward to your next post Vishal!
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It’s so true Radhika:) We need to make the most of life and one day will dawn on us for not making the most.
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A very emotional heart touching short Story…
Superb post.. ❤
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Thank you Shradha. But I pray that no mother goes through this pain.
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You’re absolutely right….
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superb post
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Thank you Riffat!
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Heartbreaking.
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Truly it is!
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Like you mentioned in a previous comment, no mother should ever go through this!
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Yes Deepika.
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Very touchy one.
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Yes Jyotirmoy. Sometimes life is very harsh!
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Touching! It makes me feel bad and regretful altogether. 😐😞
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Glad that my story could convey that emotion Bhavika.
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Wish there’s a miracle and the child is saved.
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Hope is what we all hold on to, in such trying times.
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Yes rightly said Mam.
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This one is sad….I wish the ending is different than expected…I hope this is not the last meal…there should be many more meals to come
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Yes, I too hope for the same Balaka.
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Amazingly touching write up using so less words…kudos
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Thanks dear🙂
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An emotional read… perfectly written…
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Thanks Ashish!
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Oh, those are very very painful words. A meal I wish no one, no mother and son, will have to endure
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It is heartbreaking for the entire family.
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What could be more tragic than losing a child! I wish no mother ever has to go through this!
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Amen to that wish Shaloo.
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Quite emotional. Especially a mother and a child’s relationship portrays the purest form of love.
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Yes Sheetal, true!
How have you been? Missing your posts.
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I am doing fine di. Just busy nowadays. 🙂 What about you? 🙂
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Am doing good dear ☺️
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Nice to hear that. 🙂
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It is so painful !
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Yes. Tragic and painful!
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Very beautiful post…..heart touching….
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Thank you Madhusudan 🙂
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It is such a touching story.
Beautiful.
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Thank you Moushmi!
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It’s really difficult to judge what must be going in the mind of mother …heart wrenching
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Only pain and grief!
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How’s you Dear Radhika Di.😊.? ..I wasn’t well during last 15 days .
…thank God I got well just before the first day of my college.
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Oh! Glad that you recovered in time. Wishing you all the best for the new semester 😊💖
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Thank you Radhika Di. ..hope your daughters school must also have been re-opened …There’s lot of activity before the school re-opened. ..new books , new note books , new bag, new raincoat , I still remember I used to put on brown paper covers on my books and notebooks…my father used to do it when I was small latter on I learnt it from him …the schools first day was always an exciting one…new friends and new class teacher 😊
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Yes Kiran , her school has reopened. Luckily her school doesn’t insist on covering the books with brown paper. So I am spared of the tedious chore.😁
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How sweetly you tell this tale. We cherish simple moments even in the midst of great sorrow. ❤️
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Thank you Kat. 💖
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Sad but lovely 🙂
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Thank you Arlene!!
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Just 7 characters short to perfection! ☺
Understandably, nobody is perfect. Yet this is a very well-written response to a challenge I might say 👍👍
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Still a long way for me to reach perfection Andrei. ☺️
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You’re on the way there Radhika ☺
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Thanks for the encouragement Andrei 😊
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Always welcome ☺
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A touching one…and nicely done as always. It’s not easy to tell a story in 140 characters… 🙂
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Thanks Mani. Have very recently tried my hand at attempting micro fiction!
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…and you are doing justice to it fully…. 🙂
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Thanks for all the encouragement M 😇
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Very emotional words
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Thank you Daneel!
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Welcome Radhika
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It’s only a tale, but very sad and well written Radhikas!!!
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Thank you!
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Profound
. I can only feel.
,Feel where words have become short of expression..
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I am glad you could feel the emotions of the words. Thank you 🙂
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Very sad and emotional one Radhika.
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Yes Malini.
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Two sentences and there is a complete story there. Well done!
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Thank you so much Eric!
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Ohh such an emotional tale and you’ve brilliantly managed to convey the emotion in such few words!
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Thanks dear. Coming from a short fiction queen, it means a lot to me 😇
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It’s always a pleasure to read your works. Ohhh short fiction queen! That’s so kind and generous of you to say. 😘❤😁 I’m so honoured!
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You truly deserve the title Shweta 💖
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Hey… i have nominated you with an award
Please check my recent post
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Thanks for the nomination. But have declared my blog is an award free. So will not be able to accept it !
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I am glad you could spirit the emotions of the words.
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Thank you 🙂
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