This Challenge is hosted by Sangbad of www.thoughtsofwordsblog.com. for the Fortnight Friday Fables jointly with Sheetal Bharadwaj.
The rules are :
Write a haiku on Monsoon.
Now, remember Haiku is the easy part. The main challenge is:
Writing shall not be in a conventional manner i.e. 5-7-5 or free-verse; it shall follow the following pattern–
i. 3-5-3
ii. 2-3-2
iii. 1-3-1
My haiku for the above challenge:
Dark clouds melt
pearly droplets fall
green life thrives
Mystic
ecstasy
imbues
God’s
signature
tune!
Wow…they are beautiful…and you adore the challenge very well…thanks for participating…
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Thank you Sangbad. I enjoyed writing his one ☺️
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Welcome Ma’am…
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Fantastic..short and sweet lines.
Choice of words is wonderful.
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Thanks a lot Neha☺️
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😃
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Wow 🙂
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Thanks Arlene!
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Lovely, you faced the challenge with melting words
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Many thanks Meenakshi 😇
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Very nice Radhika
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Thanks Daneel!
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Welcome Radhika
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You are a magician of words…too good
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Thank you Balaka for your generous comment 😇💖
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My pleasure
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Beautiful Words !!
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Thanks Deepika 🙂
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The haiku is really well written!!👌
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Thank you so much 🙂
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how do you manage mathematical poetry? That too with grace and charm. Great!!!
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Haha, a good phrase….. mathematical poetry, I like that !😁 Thanks a ton 💖
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Raindrops have flown mellifluously in your haiku….
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Many thanks M!
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God’s signature tune, indeed. Magic from the skies. Enjoy, Radhika!
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I feel they are absolutely magical!
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Lucky you, you are in the midst of it all!
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The last one is beauty! You nailed it there! 🙂
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Glad you think so! Thanks a lot 😊
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Reblogged this on Thoughts of Words and commented:
Another Rainy Entry from my dear Radhika Ma’am…to know more of the challenge please check my blog…
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Thanks Sangbad!!
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Welcome Ma’am…
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Sadly, I’ve never got the hang of Haiku.
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Do give it a try Asha. It is not very difficult!
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And every heart dance! Blissful lines !!
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Absolutely Meenakshi. Monsoon has the magic to make the heart dance 😊
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Lovely writing!
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Thank you!
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Hi…I am trying to learn about haiku….please check this and give me pointers…
“Rain brings love,
Water washes away pain,
Memories were refreshed”
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Since you are aware of the syllable rule just follow it. For haiku it is 5-7-5. In the above verse the first line has only 3 syllables as all three words are only 1 syllable each.
Wa- ter is 2, wa – shes is again 2 a- way is 2 and pain is 1. So total of 7 which is perfect!
Again the last line has 6 syllables…..exceeding the permissible limit by 1.
Hope this was helpful!
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Yup it does…ok…I got it…will post some haiku….I want to you to check them before I post them…is that alright radhika?
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👍👍
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Is this the correct way to write, I mean i know about the sylablle rule, but dont know how to create one…please it would be helpful if you can help me out.
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