To use only their synonym in any form of poetry. In response to Colleen’s weekly poetry prompt #61.
Desolate and bald
the net of desertion fails
the lone tree stands tall
amid a blanket of snow
certain of sprouting afresh!
To use only their synonym in any form of poetry. In response to Colleen’s weekly poetry prompt #61.
Desolate and bald
the net of desertion fails
the lone tree stands tall
amid a blanket of snow
certain of sprouting afresh!
I’d like to think that way. Of life beyond death. Of Hope beyond despair. Great thinking, Radhika.
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Hope beyond despair…..how beautiful! That’s the spirit we need to hold on to, in life when we feel like giving up! Thanks Asha 🙂
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Yes, I believe so too. But the immense possibilities it adds to my writing calibre. It’s just amazing. How do you do, love?
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All good dear ❣️
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A while ago I was reading a post on depression and then I see this. It felt so connected. Inspiring…
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Happy to hear that. Thank you!
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Perfect lines for a wonderful snow covered picture and for sure desertion in this whole expanse with just one tree standing tall. Great words, Radhika.
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Thank you Kamal!
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Welcome Radhika.
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Awesome ! Enjoyed reading this !!
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Thanks Megala 🙂
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Exactly what we need to follow in life. Without getting disheartened by falls and failures, to be certain of sprouting wherever we are . Well expressed, Radhika.
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Absolutely. It’s only a matter of time before things will brighten again. Many thanks Deepika 🙂
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The contrast and shadow of life, pain and joy beautifully narrated.
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Thank you Vishal!
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Positive, and a very strong post Radhika,
loved it.
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Thank you Moushmi!
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Welcome 🙂
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Such beautiful lines of hope and determination!
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Thank you Shaloo!
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I loved the word ‘certain’ in the last line!
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Thanks Pragalbha. When there is cent percent hope, it becomes belief, faith and then certainty which is very much needed to wade through bleak times.
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You are welcome. Very truly said!
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Love Asha’s analysis. Beautiful tanka Radhika!! We can always sprout back to life!
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Absolutely. With hope and belief, you are bound to befriend resilience! Thanks P!
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Resilience extinguishes resistance! Your welcome Radhika! 🙂
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Well said 👍
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Yes, fresh hope will blossom in spring.
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Hope is what we hold on to , when all fails…..thanks Mani!
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Beautiful choice of words, echoing perfectly the scenery above!
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Thanks Divya 🙂
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Justice Done
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Shiva
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Many thanks Shiva!
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Lovely thoughts.
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Thanks Rupali!
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Absolutely certain! Nature has stories to tell us and a little thought can help us see the wisdom that it speaks. Loved the wisdom, Radhika.
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Thank you Pranitha!
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Excellent Radhika. You are on a poetry roll. This tanka reminds me of a tanka that I had written on a similar picture. 🙂 Nature inspires.
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Thanks a lot Somali. And yes nature never fails to impress and inspire!
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