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Life Tour!

In response to secretkeeper.net’s weekly writing challenge  #161, to use the 5 prompt words given below in a poem/story.

TOUR|HOUR|CHASE|EVOLVE|DUST

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With birth, we sign up for a

 tour package called “life”

hours roll by into years,

traversing endlessly

to chase a material mirage

creating an illusionary happiness.

Very few souls evolve

to merge into higher realms,

before the transitory body

becomes one with the dust!

 

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67 comments on “Life Tour!

  1. ShankySalty
    October 4, 2018

    Amazing lines💐😊

    Liked by 3 people

  2. BeingAlive
    October 4, 2018

    Awesome 👍🏻👌🏻💐🌹

    Liked by 2 people

  3. Sakshi
    October 4, 2018

    This is so profound…….👏👏👏👏

    Liked by 2 people

  4. syncwithdeep
    October 4, 2018

    Brilliant..

    Liked by 3 people

  5. Bhavana Madbhavi
    October 4, 2018

    Lovely!

    Liked by 3 people

  6. debanitaghosh
    October 4, 2018

    Lovely share!

    Liked by 3 people

  7. The Typewriter
    October 4, 2018

    Yes, yes, yes… All for it.. thanks for the awesome read.. reading time and again.. ✌🏼👍🏼😇😊👒👌🏼

    Liked by 1 person

  8. daneelyunus
    October 4, 2018

    Nice one

    Liked by 2 people

  9. Megala
    October 4, 2018

    Beautiful comparison of life and tour! I enjoyed reading it.

    Liked by 2 people

  10. thatreaderbee
    October 4, 2018

    Beautiful 😻

    Liked by 2 people

  11. Ben Aqiba
    October 4, 2018

    Hi Radhika,

    tour package called “life”- I love this line, so simple but so deep !

    Liked by 3 people

  12. Moushmi Radhanpara
    October 4, 2018

    Absolutely wonderful lines here.

    Liked by 2 people

  13. Piyali
    October 4, 2018

    Love the wordplay. Beautiful poetry.

    Liked by 3 people

  14. vidur sahdev
    October 4, 2018

    Beautifully said, Radhika!

    Liked by 3 people

  15. Isha Garg
    October 4, 2018

    Radhika, your writing is skilled and effortless! This is truly something❤

    Liked by 3 people

  16. iScriblr
    October 5, 2018

    Absolutely brilliant!❤

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Told everything about life in few beautiful words

    Liked by 2 people

  18. Indira
    October 5, 2018

    Very creative!

    Liked by 3 people

  19. ravindra nayak
    October 5, 2018

    Nice share

    Liked by 2 people

  20. DeepikasRamblings
    October 5, 2018

    Such a complicated journey, brought out so well in a few lines, Radhika !!

    Liked by 3 people

  21. Megha's World
    October 5, 2018

    Very aptly you have defined the journey of life.

    Liked by 2 people

  22. boundlessblessingsblog
    October 5, 2018

    Brilliant composition of words and so true Radhika. What a great picture too of life tour and yes very few evolve into their Oneness. Awesome poem.

    Liked by 2 people

  23. Jyo
    October 5, 2018

    Such a beautiful write up ! Nice perspective about tour and life !
    Btw pic tho outstanding 👌

    Liked by 2 people

  24. ESP
    October 6, 2018

    This is a great read..well done

    Liked by 2 people

  25. Shantanu Baruah
    October 6, 2018

    How beautiful

    Liked by 2 people

  26. Akshaya Thulasi
    October 7, 2018

    Wonderful lines
    With birth, we sign up for a
     tour package called “life”
    Liked this poem
    Keep sharing 💙

    Liked by 2 people

  27. thewritewomanblog
    October 10, 2018

    From dust to dust, that we must always bear in mind, the rest will fall into place.

    Liked by 3 people

  28. Bhavna Saurabh Sharma
    October 14, 2018

    “Becomes one with the dust”
    I have no words to describe the beauty of this wonderful composition

    Liked by 1 person

  29. brianaleonard
    October 16, 2018

    great post! love your page.

    Liked by 2 people

  30. globalchange145
    November 5, 2018

    Excellent post! Bless you!

    Liked by 1 person

  31. Sifar
    November 18, 2018

    Sublime!!

    Liked by 1 person

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