In response to secretkeeper.net’s weekly writing challenge #161, to use the 5 prompt words given below in a poem/story.
TOUR|HOUR|CHASE|EVOLVE|DUST
With birth, we sign up for a
tour package called “life”
hours roll by into years,
traversing endlessly
to chase a material mirage
creating an illusionary happiness.
Very few souls evolve
to merge into higher realms,
before the transitory body
becomes one with the dust!
radhikasreflection 
Amazing lines💐😊
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Thank you 🙂
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Awesome 👍🏻👌🏻💐🌹
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Gratitude!
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This is so profound…….👏👏👏👏
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Thank you Sakshi 🙂
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My pleasure 😊
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Brilliant..
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Thanks Deepa 🙂
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Lovely!
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Thanks Bhavana!
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Lovely share!
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Many thanks Debanita!
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Yes, yes, yes… All for it.. thanks for the awesome read.. reading time and again.. ✌🏼👍🏼😇😊👒👌🏼
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Humbled Debika 🙏. Thanks so much 💖
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😇😇
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Nice one
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Thanks Daneel!
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Welcome Radhika
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Beautiful comparison of life and tour! I enjoyed reading it.
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Glad to hear that Megala. Thanks!
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Beautiful 😻
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Thanks dear 🙂
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Hi Radhika,
tour package called “life”- I love this line, so simple but so deep !
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Thank you so much Ben!
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Absolutely wonderful lines here.
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Thank you Moushumi!
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Love the wordplay. Beautiful poetry.
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Thank you Piyali!
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Beautifully said, Radhika!
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Thank you Vidur!
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Always a pleasure!
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Radhika, your writing is skilled and effortless! This is truly something❤
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Your comment warms my heart Isha. Many thanks 💖
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Absolutely brilliant!❤
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Told everything about life in few beautiful words
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Many thanks Meenakshi!
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Very creative!
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Thank you Indira 😊
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Nice share
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Thank you Ravindra!
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You’re most welcome Radhika
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Such a complicated journey, brought out so well in a few lines, Radhika !!
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Thanks a lot Deepika 🙂
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Very aptly you have defined the journey of life.
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Thank you Megha!
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My pleasure Radhika.
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Brilliant composition of words and so true Radhika. What a great picture too of life tour and yes very few evolve into their Oneness. Awesome poem.
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Thank you Kamal!
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Welcome Radhika
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Such a beautiful write up ! Nice perspective about tour and life !
Btw pic tho outstanding 👌
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Thanks Jyo for the appreciation 💖
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This is a great read..well done
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Thanks ESP!
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How beautiful
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Thanks Shantanu!
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My pleasure 😇
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Wonderful lines
With birth, we sign up for a
tour package called “life”
Liked this poem
Keep sharing 💙
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Many thanks Akshaya 🙂
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From dust to dust, that we must always bear in mind, the rest will fall into place.
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Well said P!
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“Becomes one with the dust”
I have no words to describe the beauty of this wonderful composition
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great post! love your page.
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Excellent post! Bless you!
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Thank you 🙏
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Sublime!!
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Thank you!
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