Silent tears flowing
crashing waves against the shore
meandering butterflies
halcyon breeze of the eventide
twinkling stars outside the window
undulating emotions of the mind
reflections in the bare mirror
the quietude in solitude
reveries of the subconscious
behavior of our body
paths we tread on
vibrations of the cosmos
a mere touch, a look, a hum
all whisper secret messages to us,
if only we have the ear to hear them!
Must listen carefully to all whispers of life…!! Excellent, Radhika!
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Oh yes Indira. There are many we can hear of only we paid heed to it. Thanks!!
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Kively. Describes so well
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Thanks a lot Lorraine!
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Beautiful!
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Many thanks!
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Such beautiful and evocative words, R! Awesomeness flowing in each phrase! So true – the world is full of signs and they shout out to us as they possibly can. Alas, if only we would heed…
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Thanks N. Yes, i wish we humans learn to pause a bit, listen to what our body and nature is telling us. Life can turn out to be very different then.
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Nicely write, Radhika! There are so many whispers around us waiting for us to hear them…
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Yes, only that we turn a deaf ear to them.
Thanks Sunith
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So true,we are unable to listen…
Very nice coining of words and presentation also.
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Thank you so much Jyotirmoy!
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Beautiful write; touching message.
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Thank you V.J!
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You are welcome!
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WOW.. 👍🏼😇❤💕…..👌🏼…
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🙏🙂💕
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Your poetic finesse with words is inspirational. ❤ So many secret messages whisper to one’s psyche, but some are hard to decipher. A fleeting feeling of something beyond the physical world, “a vibration from the cosmos” or an aha moment that touches the heart.
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Thank you so much Olga. I guess we need to tune the frequency of our mind to connect to those vibrations from the cosmos. I know it’s easier said than done, but with awareness comes evolution. 🙏♥️
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In the midst of nature, with an awareness to listen and without the mobile to distract 😉
Beautiful language and construct of the poem
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Thank you Karthik. Keeping away from the myriad distraction will be a challenge in this journey….huge but certainly doable.
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Wow, beautiful lines. The last two lines enhance the beauty of the entire poetry👌👌
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Thanks a bunch Deepika 🙂
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So beautiful read Radhika 👍
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Thank you Jyo 😊
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Radhika, a subliime poem and if only indeed! All around is the magic of the universe … the trick is to listen, understand, relate … yet how often does one allow oneself the time and energy to share in this beauty of existence.
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Isn’t it sad Annika, though we are aware of this to a great extent, yet we keep ourselves deaf to the signs and whispers that the universe tries to tell us?
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So true … but it seems to me that more and more are listening and acting.
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If that is so then, it is a wonderful step forward….
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You are truly taking me to some wonderful world ma’am, thank you
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Thank you Meenakshi. I am glad that you enjoy my world of words and thoughts.
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Thought provoking. Yes truly if we have the ear to listen to the whispers and vibrations of the cosmos. 👏🏻
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Thank you Pallavi 🙂
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And also what a great picture you chose. It almost has that dual message, a child, who’s probably much more aware and awakened to the vibrations is trying to whisper into an adult ear.
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I have always observed that children are always more aware, awakened and a bundle of curiosity. They somehow lose that in the process of growing up.
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So true!
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Listening is an art most of us have not mastered! Evocative lines, Radhika. ❤️
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Unfortunately true Punam. Thanks 🙂
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You are welcome. 🙂
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Beautiful poem 😊 Picture is awesome too❤️
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Thank you Krishna 🙂
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Beautiful whispering words, Radhika and the picture was so profound. Awesome poem.
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Thank you Kamal
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Welcome Radhika.
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Yes right Radhika all whispers are secret messages to us… !!! 😊
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Yes, only we need to learn the art of listening and deciphering them. Thanks S 🙂
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Yes its true.. the more we hear the voices on the inside the more we get understanding of what happening on the outside.
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“Quietude in Solitude”…. Great creation indeed… Splendid work… Beautifully played with words and the picture is awesome… Liked it… 🙂
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Thanks a lot Ashish 🙏
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