Embryonic rays
dawn exalts a coral blush
horizon aflame
mercury soars high
punctures the billowy clouds
casts a scorching gaze
the western skyline
brims with wisps of lavender
aesthetic adieu.
Embryonic rays
dawn exalts a coral blush
horizon aflame
mercury soars high
punctures the billowy clouds
casts a scorching gaze
the western skyline
brims with wisps of lavender
aesthetic adieu.
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How beautifully you have depicted sun’s journey from dawn to dusk in three haikus! Excellent, Radhika. ❤️
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Thank you so much Punam 💕
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You are welcome, my dear. 💞
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Beautiful pic and beautiful haikus to add splendor to describe the sun’s journey 👌
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Thanks much Deepika 🙂
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A lovely end to the day expressed beautifully, Radhika. Thank you for participating.
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Thanks Eugenia. Absolutely my pleasure 🙂
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😊
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Beautiful. I love these
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Many thanks Lorraine
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This is sooooo beautiful — love the aesthetic adieu — a magical ending!
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So glad to hear that Krishna Priya. Thanks 💕
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Beautiful picture and an awesome aesthetic feel to the whole poem saying a final adieu. Lovely, Radhika.
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Thank you Kamal
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Welcome 😊😊😊 Radhika
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Enjoyed all these lovely haikus !
Beautiful picture 😊
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Many thanks Daya 🙂
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Radhika, magical and evocative descriptions in your haikus here capturing the traverse of the sun across the skyline! Your writing is sublime and I’ve read this many times, in awe. Inspiring!
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Thanks for your kind words of appreciation Annika. Means a lot ♥️
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Beautiful poetry and reflection of nature.
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Many thanks Stephen!
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What an exquisitely beautiful write! Thanks for joining in.
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Gratitude V.J. Enjoyed writing this one !!
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Most welcome. Always happy to have you here.
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Outstanding compositions, R, describing the sun’s journey through the day! “Embryonic rays” is an ingenious expression and quite powerful.
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Thank you N. I felt the expression was just perfect to depict the nascent yet sublime morning rays.
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Brilliant compositions. Esp loved the line ” punctures the billowy clouds” which creates such a vivid image.
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Thanks so much Megha!
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Embryonic rays to aesthetic adieu!! Excellent, Radhika!
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Thank you Indira 🙏
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Beautiful!
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Thank you Pallavi
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Beautifully expressed the end of the day!!! 💕
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Thanks S!
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Beautifully crafted imagery, absolutely loved this Haiku poem. 😊
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Thank you so much 🙏
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Beautiful!
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Thanks Richa. How are you and your lil princess?
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All well Radhika.. Thank you for asking!❤️ Each day is a new learning experience for both of us!☺️
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I love the Haikus – beautiful.
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Thank you Paul!!
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Very welcome Radhika.
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A gorgeous Haiku
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Thanks a lot Drew 😊
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This is an eloquent poem.
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Thank you Snehal
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Welcome.
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Love this, Radhika! Exquisite. ❤
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Thank you Cheryl ❤️
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