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The final journey…

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Finally, freed from the mortal body,

the soul travels on an astral journey,

 where endless peace envelopes it.

Word count :18

Hope my final journey will be as beautiful as this.

44 comments on “The final journey…

  1. gulfcoastpoet@gmail.com
    August 30, 2020

    Beautiful, Radhika! All the best! Cheryl

    Liked by 3 people

  2. HappySoul
    August 30, 2020

    Nice one R.. ! Isn’t it? That’s the thought I got too.. “hope my final journey will be as peaceful” and I read it at the end

    Liked by 4 people

  3. DeepikasRamblings
    August 30, 2020

    Yes Radhika. Simple truth of life so beautifully expressed. I guess, everyone would long for a simple, peaceful journey 👍

    Liked by 3 people

  4. Dulcy Singh
    August 30, 2020

    Wow it really wonderful 👍👍

    Liked by 2 people

  5. Era
    August 30, 2020

    Beautiful !

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Shashank Narayan
    August 30, 2020

    A small and simple journey towards enlightenment, really thought provoking words 🙂

    Liked by 3 people

  7. uzzawal1911
    August 30, 2020

    Nicely written Radhika, reading the poem itself gave me a certain level of peace. Well done 🙌

    Liked by 2 people

  8. Rishika Kakar
    August 30, 2020

    Brilliant! You’ve put the journey in the Afterlife in such a poignant manner. Your words deliver serenity. Love it!

    Liked by 2 people

  9. Untold Stories
    August 30, 2020

    Nice take on prompt 👍
    Hopefully last journeys becomes peaceful!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. vishalbheeroo
    August 30, 2020

    Couldn’t be so true about astral journey of the soul. You can’t believe it yesterday a friend’s Dad passed away and as he was resting on the pyre, wondered what the soul must be thinking. True, he looked peaceful before foraying on his final journey.

    Liked by 3 people

  11. Deeksha Pathak
    August 30, 2020

    We all wish our final journey to be so peaceful! I wish the present journey also could be with a bit of peace and joy then till the last moment no complaints!!

    Liked by 2 people

  12. boundlessblessingsblog
    August 30, 2020

    Of course why will it not be. You are so right and a lovely challenge taken on the world Endless.

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Keith's Ramblings
    August 30, 2020

    To some that would a blessed relief, to others pure joy.

    My eighteen!

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Indira
    August 30, 2020

    Interesting composition on the theme, radhika!

    Liked by 1 person

  15. kittysverses
    August 30, 2020

    That’s a nice thought, Ma’am. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Piyush Gulati
    August 30, 2020

    Reading this, I also hope that my astral journey is like this. If a writeup can make me feel like that, then it has done its work. Well written, Radhika ! ✨

    Liked by 2 people

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  18. myexpressionofthoughtsblog
    August 31, 2020

    Beautiful Radhika .. how well you penned . Crisp and meaningful

    Liked by 1 person

  19. For sure, you are a beautiful soul. Your words full of peace.
    Hope mine too will be 🙏🏻

    Liked by 1 person

  20. Smithasbakelove
    September 1, 2020

    Endless – pretty powerful word. You used it to portray the soul journey so beautifully.

    Like

  21. Rupali
    September 1, 2020

    Apt for the theme, Radhika.

    Liked by 1 person

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