The final journey…
Finally, freed from the mortal body,
the soul travels on an astral journey,
where endless peace envelopes it.
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Hope my final journey will be as beautiful as this.
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Beautiful, Radhika! All the best! Cheryl
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Thank you Cheryl!
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Nice one R.. ! Isn’t it? That’s the thought I got too.. “hope my final journey will be as peaceful” and I read it at the end
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Thanks HS. Yes, hoping for that when it happens.
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Yes Radhika. Simple truth of life so beautifully expressed. I guess, everyone would long for a simple, peaceful journey 👍
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Absolutely, that’s what is wished for. Thanks Deepika
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Wow it really wonderful 👍👍
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Thanks Dulcy
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Beautiful !
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Thanks Era ❣️
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💞🤗
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A small and simple journey towards enlightenment, really thought provoking words 🙂
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Thanks so much Shashank!
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Nicely written Radhika, reading the poem itself gave me a certain level of peace. Well done 🙌
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Thanks a lot Uzzawal 🙏
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Brilliant! You’ve put the journey in the Afterlife in such a poignant manner. Your words deliver serenity. Love it!
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Makes me happy to read your feedback Rishika. Thanks a bunch!
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Nice take on prompt 👍
Hopefully last journeys becomes peaceful!
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Amen. Thanks Rashmi
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Couldn’t be so true about astral journey of the soul. You can’t believe it yesterday a friend’s Dad passed away and as he was resting on the pyre, wondered what the soul must be thinking. True, he looked peaceful before foraying on his final journey.
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How the final bell of life rings is beyond our control. Hope he had a good life. Take care.
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We all wish our final journey to be so peaceful! I wish the present journey also could be with a bit of peace and joy then till the last moment no complaints!!
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That would be so nice Deeksha if we experienced peace in life and death.
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Of course why will it not be. You are so right and a lovely challenge taken on the world Endless.
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Thanks so much Kamal 🙏
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Welcome dear Radhika.
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To some that would a blessed relief, to others pure joy.
My eighteen!
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Thanks Keith!
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Interesting composition on the theme, radhika!
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Thank you Indira
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That’s a nice thought, Ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks Aishwarya 🙂
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Reading this, I also hope that my astral journey is like this. If a writeup can make me feel like that, then it has done its work. Well written, Radhika ! ✨
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I am glad you felt the words Piyush. Thanks a ton. Have a wonderful week ahead 💙🙏
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You too 😊✨
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Beautiful Radhika .. how well you penned . Crisp and meaningful
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Thanks so much Tanvir!
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For sure, you are a beautiful soul. Your words full of peace.
Hope mine too will be 🙏🏻
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I am sure it will be Meenakshi ❣️
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Endless – pretty powerful word. You used it to portray the soul journey so beautifully.
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Apt for the theme, Radhika.
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Thanks Rupali
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