
Now, at the fag end of life,
home alone, in an empty nest,
I wrestle with my waning memory, fogged under
receding hairline and furrowed brow.
Misplacing things, is a daily affair,
forgetfulness, my constant companion.
Simple tasks seem daunting,
what I did in a jiffy, now takes ages.
Today, the mirror reflects my withered shell,
but beneath it, I am still a beautiful soul.
As I glance back at the rear view mirror of life,
I have realized that, it is futile confronting the loss of youth.
In graceful acceptance of old age, with all its quirkiness,
lies the key to happiness!
gracefully coming to terms with the inevitable…beautifully expressed, radhika. It’s hard work but no shortcuts!
LikeLiked by 2 people
I agree Daya. It requires a tremendous effort to stay positive and happy when your body doesn’t listen to you any more. Thanks a lot!
LikeLiked by 1 person
This must make people who are old smile π Such a positive take on getting old. Beautiful π
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you Vignesh. I hope it does.π
LikeLiked by 1 person
This. Is. Such. A. Beautiful. Poem. Radhika! πππ«
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks Deeksha π
LikeLiked by 1 person
A beautiful poem Radhika. Love how youβve depicted the loss of grace with old age and then pivot around to a graceful acceptance of it. Thanks for joining in
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you Sadje. Glad you liked it π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Youβre welcome! Exactly Poetry.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I feel you
LikeLiked by 2 people
ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is so beautifully expressed Radhika!
Honest truths shared with such imagery!ππ
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thanks a lot dear Cindy π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Youβre sooo welcome my friend!π
LikeLiked by 1 person
You said it!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you Yagneshji π
LikeLike
Wecome.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh how I resonate with your words, Radhika!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you V.J π
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nicely put! Thanks for sharing.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks Mandisa!
LikeLike
Beautiful poem R!β€
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thanks N β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Totally agree with your beautiful words. Thanks
LikeLiked by 3 people
Glad to hear that Selma. Thank you π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Spot on, Radhika! Lovely poem. You must be precocious to know this! π
LikeLiked by 2 people
Cheryl, thank you so much. There are some elderly people who have aged so gracefully and remain ever so happy. They inspired me to pen this and is a dedication to all such young at heart oldies πβ€οΈπ
LikeLiked by 2 people
Beautiful and such a lovely way of unfurling our old age though beneath we are as young as ever.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you Kamal. We should always strive to keep our inner self young and happy.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes absolutely true. Welcome Radhika π
LikeLiked by 1 person
A very beautiful poem Radhika, you convey a very relevant and important truth. It is wise to begin to explore who we are really under this physical body identity that we wear on ourselves.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Absolutely Pragalbha. The sooner we connect with our inner self, the better it is. Thank you so much π
LikeLiked by 1 person
ππΌππΌππππππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wonderfully crafted Radhika. Life is all about accepting gracefully as it is . Beautiful imagery.
LikeLiked by 3 people
I agree Sowmya. Thank you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am 80, going on to 81.I feel this poem is for me.If not the whole of it ,specially the last line which says
βIn graceful acceptance of old age, with all its quirkiness,
lies the key to happiness!β
LikeLiked by 3 people
One day, God willing we all will reach that age, and it is so important for us to remember to accept all the idiosyncrasies that come along, with grace. Fighting it is futile.
Thank you so much for taking time out and sharing your thoughts π
LikeLiked by 1 person
A beautiful tribute to aging, Radhika, and a lovely take on the prompt!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much Eugi π
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure, Radhika.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful poem Radhika. Getting old is amazing process.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you Anjali
LikeLike
My pleasure π.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautifully written! A good alternate title for this poem would Mirrors
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thanks A. Ah, yes that would be a good title too ππ»
LikeLiked by 1 person
Many of us can relate to your words Iβm sure.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Yes, slowly we are all reaching there!
LikeLiked by 1 person
This defines old, honest and beauty. Really a great jib dear
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you π
LikeLiked by 1 person
mine pleasure.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awesome take and poem, Radhika. Super fun. βΊοΈ
LikeLike
A wise post Radhika.. We should explore while we have time.. over the years all the matter are memories…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful, soothing and healing. πππ»πͺ
LikeLike
Such a brilliant poem!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks Vinny
LikeLike
Nice poem…keepitupππ
LikeLike
Comforting π€ Iβd prefer to say, Iβm still a person. Not necessarily beautiful in the soul area or any other area, but alright, considering
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love this, Radhika! You point to such important truths⦠achieving the serenity of acceptance is a fine aim as we age.
LikeLike
So touching. Written with such emotion
LikeLike
Hi mam I like the choices of word specialy I relate to lineβ home alone in empty nest β
This line remind me Iβm nothing without my people . Life become beautiful if our people with us . π
LikeLike
That beautiful phase of life which penned down in words so perfectly.β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Namrata β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Iβll be 60 next year, yet my mind is still back in my 20s. Sadly, the body canβt seem to keep up. It is an adjustment and acceptance difficult. But it is inevitable, so I guess I will eventually get there. Maybe when Iβm so old, Iβll be too tired to complain? Good write, Radhika!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I know Susi, aging is a process where the body speaks a different language, quite challenging to comprehend. But the fact that your mind is in your 20s, shows that you are very young at heart. So acceptance and moving on will be a graceful transition. β€οΈ
Thanks a lot Susi. Have a lovely weekend!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful poem expressed the acceptance of old age. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person