Burden of regrets, scars of the past, become too heavy to carry,
beset by winds of uncertainties of future, peace drifts away.
I oscillate between these two spectrums, oblivious of today.
A helpless pawn, I am lost in the labyrinth
trying to circumvent the rotating orb.
Life continues to teach me to play
the game of yesterday, today and tomorrow.
I lose track of time, trying to understand its rules.
By the time I realise its simplicity,
greys and wrinkles paint me frail.
The game ends, without me enjoying it!
Britta asked us to write a poem on the theme of Time.
Writem so simply, but biting cold. Truth we live feeling everyday.
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Yes, it takes a conscious effort to be in the present.
Thanks Narayan !
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The sad truth of life beautifully expressed.
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Thank you Smitha
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Well-written!
Life is a game that we are always learning to play, is it not?Post-book blues
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Yup! Only, some are quick learners while some take a lifetime. Thanks Pradeep!
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I love your words.
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Glad you liked it Selma. Thank you
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We are all players of this game, Radhika and we do keep learning the nitty grittys as we move along…so don’t lose hope, we hold hands and move together, we can swing by with ease 👍
A well written piece 👌
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We are constantly learning, should be the only constant 😊
Thanks Deepika. Yes, i hope we all swing by with ease!
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Great expression of the vagaries of time
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Thanks Sadje
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You’re welcome my friend
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All we have is the present. Yet too often, yesterday and tomorrow rob today of its joys. Your words express this beautifully.
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Very true Patricia. We are so caught with yesterday and tomorrow that we forget to live today. Thanks so much 💖
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Such truth and how beautifully you write in your poem. The games and the rules – consume a lifetime trying to make sense of it all, until we arrive at the simplicity of it all – your concluding line is felt deeply.
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Very often, life is simple. It’s we humans who unnecessarily complicate it. Thank you Pragalbha for feeling my words so beautifully.
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What a powerful reminder to live mindfully, Radhika! Beautifully expressed, dramatic image!
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We often forget that! Thank you Cheryl.
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From Mahabharata times, time plays an imporatant role; but, Aldus Huxley wrote a century or more back that Indians have no idea of time, all because we had not invented time machine, then. Our idea of time is not in the scale of hours (until we established our own HMT). We could predict the coming eclipse correct to minute all because we were time-conscious!
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poignant and amazing introspection Radhika!
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Thank you Cindy 💖
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You’re so welcome Radhika! 💖
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A wonderful contemplation, Radhika. Lovely write. 💙
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Thank you so much Jeff 💙
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You’re welcome, Radhika. Always. 💙
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Wow
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Thanks Era
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Beautiful take on the theme, Radhika! Brilliant!
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Thank you Indira
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A wonderful take on this wonderful theme Radhika. Excellent poem and the picture too is perfect.
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Thank you Kamal
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Welcome Radhika ♥️
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Well said!
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Thanks Sunil
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it’s beautiful ❤️👌
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Thank you Seema ❤️
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WOW – this is true of so many people, Radhika! What a wise poem 🙂
❤
David
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Thank you David ❤️
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A great introspection, Radhika. 🌝
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Thanks Suni!
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So well said. By the time life ends we realise that we have never lived it rather got stuck up in the web mentioned in poem. Wonderful post Radhika.
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I know, when the realisation dawns, it’s too late. Thank you Tanvir
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Agree.. my pleasure Radhika
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Hi, Radhika! ❤
I just want to let you know that the 4th W3 prompt, hosted by Kerfe Roig, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/05/25/w3-prompt-4-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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Thanks David. Slightly tied up. But will surely check it out. Thanks my friend !
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No pressure
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Spoken so well, Radhika! You’ve definitely captured the passage of time. 🙂
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Thanks Susi
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