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Haiku – Flow & Tear

Tears flow unabashed,

the harsh trigger of your words,

shreds my soul apart.

In response to Ronovanwrites weekly haiku challenge #133


45 comments on “Haiku – Flow & Tear

  1. Divya Deepak Rao
    January 23, 2017

    Words are indeed harsher than anything else. You’ve expressed it well Radhika:)❀

    Liked by 1 person

  2. boundlessblessingsblog
    January 23, 2017

    Awesome πŸ‘ no words to describe the beauty and a lovely picture too.


  3. Pat B
    January 23, 2017

    The photo and the words speak volumes.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
    January 24, 2017

    Words can cut deeply.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Meenakshi Sethi
    January 24, 2017

    Tears are silent language of heart! Beautiful Radhika!

    Liked by 2 people

  6. thewritewomanblog
    January 24, 2017

    Harsh words from your loved one can inflict unbearable pain, you have brought that out very well in so little words, Radhika.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Karthik
    January 24, 2017

    Powerful.Brief but packs a punch.:)

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Akhila
    January 24, 2017

    The poor soul….😳

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Alfaazon ki udaan
    January 24, 2017


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  10. Amit kumar
    January 24, 2017

    Tears are silent yet powerful…

    Liked by 1 person

  11. 5haili
    January 25, 2017

    Harsh words tear you apart … so true 😊😊

    Liked by 1 person

  12. paintdigi
    January 25, 2017

    Happy 2017
    Good posts, beautiful blog.
    Welcome to see my creations:


  13. Belle Pans Maze
    January 25, 2017

    So beautiful. I discovered a word totally unknown to me, unabashed, an amazing word and so perfect here in your haiku. I feel one should feel free to shed their tears unabashed to heal from those harsh words.

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      January 26, 2017

      I am glad you learnt a new word Belle. Shedding those tears freely helps us to purge out all the hurt in us.
      Thank you so much dear 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  14. A
    January 26, 2017

    Words can hurt or heal
    Depending on the way
    They are used
    Beautifully written

    Liked by 1 person

  15. Mick Talbot
    January 28, 2017

    Your beautiful haiku inspired me to compose a haiku reply,

    tears not unnoticed
    flowing down your silk smooth cheek
    unabashed feelings

    Take care – Mick

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Vashti Quiroz-Vega
    February 6, 2017

    Some don’t know the power that words have over us. Words can cause physical, psychological, spiritual and emotional pain. Loved your haiku. Well done.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. dilipnaidu
    February 13, 2017

    Yes words can destroy relationships or heal them. The choice is ours.
    Lovely Haiku.

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Dilkash Shayari
    May 31, 2017

    ΰ€¬ΰ€Ήΰ₯ΰ€€ ΰ€–ΰ₯‚ΰ€¬

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Jenny Howard
    August 8, 2018

    So much truth and so much raw feeling in so few words. Beautiful.

    Liked by 1 person

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