
I sit with my cup of morning tea, contemplating life that passes by with each tick of the clock. At times a feeling of guilt creeps into me for not having spent it wisely. As I brood over it, the calendar flutters in the breeze. Those flying pages appear to be mocking at me as if holding some secret about my future. Trepidation grips me, over what lies ahead in life. The sweet chirping of the birds shake me out of my stupor. I realise that clinging on to the past or being anxious about the future has stopped me from enjoying my today. Smiling, I finish my tea, revelling in the sweet twitter of the neighbourhood birds!
Ink stains from the past
blur the picture of future
present holds the key!
In response to Colleens weekly poetry challenge # 35 – Past & Future
This is my first attempt at writing a Haibun!
Haibun is a prosimetric literary form originating in Japan, combining prose and haiku. The range of haibun is broad and frequently includes autobiography, diary, essay, prose poem, short story and travel journal.
Nicely-done Radhika ☺. It’s good seeing you trying out various literary forms.
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Many thanks Andrei. I enjoy trying out something new always! Have a great weekend!
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A great weekend to you too Radhika
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Beautiful , Radhika . ” Present holds the key ” , true and wise words.👍
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Thanks Sudalai! Many of us dwell in the past or get anxious about our future forgetting to live the present!
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True , and only years of experience teaches us this valuable lesson of life.
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Agree!!
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Beautifully written. Radha Radha Radha sending you warm Huggs
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Thanks so much dear 💖
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So very well written and composed lines of our past, future and the presence of the present. Beautiful
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Thank you Kamal🙂
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Welcome Radhika
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Oh my! What a beautiful post Radhika! I felt like I was sitting with you as you sipped your morning tea.😊 Quiet time in the morning with just thoughts to accompany us is the best time:)
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Would have loved your company Divya 😊. I genuinely enjoy my morning cuppa in my balcony. Thanks so much. Have a lovely weekend 💜
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Beautifully written.. it really feels happy to attempt new things.. good try.. keep posting ..
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Thanks for those words of encouragement Bhagyashri!!
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You r welcome dear. Supports will always be there…
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👍😊
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Wow Ma’am….beautiful morning post…love the visualization…sometimes I also think like this…regarding title–give something abstract like Chirping or Morning Tea…just a suggestion…
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Gm Sangbad! Thanks for your feedback and suggestion, they are always welcome! 🙂
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Good morning Ma’am…am grateful for this…
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Well said Radhika
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Thank you Veena!
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Very nice, Radhika!
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Thanks Kunal!
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Beautiful..simple, nice yet profound.
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Thank you Karthik!
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Nice thought!
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Thanks Megala!
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Wonderful Radhika. I wonder if you have a magical key board which gives such good direction to your flow of thoughts. Keep them coming, for its always a pleasure to read such beautiful creations in different forms. Well done.
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Haha, unfortunately no, my keyboard has no magical keys 😀!
Thanks dear for the lovely feedback 💖😊
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My pleasure ☺️
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you publish your blogs in a book form,, and i shall stand overnight in the Que to buy one.
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Whoa!! That is a huge huge compliment. I am honoured Sir!! 😇
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Thank you 🙂
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Thanks so much for the nomination Anandhi! But I have declared my blog award free since the last few months. 😊
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Oh okay.. No problem.. Happy you have accepted it. You are one such lovely Blogger I have come acrossed.
Thank you.😍😄
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😇💜
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Beautifully said the reality
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Thank you Meenakshi!
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Ya…sometimes we are driven by our past directly into future without the conscious of the present.
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Exactly Giri. We need to be aware of it and live and enjoy the present!
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ya..
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That’s very beautifully written, Radhika, I love that you are choosing a different venue of poetry. It carries a certain simplicity which speaks to my mind and heart.
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Cornelia, thank you so much. I am thrilled to hear that you could relate to what I wrote. 🙂
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Sorry for the late response, for some reason WP didn’t allow me to see the responses. Yes I am thrilled too, what a great connection.
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Nice onr Radhika
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Another literary form.. thanks for that one, Radhika!
Believe me, I do this often, sometimes in the quiet of peaceful mornings, I wonder what the future has in store for me and yes feel a pang of guilt for the past moments spent unwisely. Indeed our mulling over the inevitable future or the past that cannot be reversed takes the beauty out of the present.
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I think to a certain extent we all do that, it is but natural and human nature. But to let it intrude upon our today beyond a limit is what we need to be aware of! Living in the now is the best way to live a fulfilling and enjoyable life! Thanks P for sharing your thoughts!
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Thank you for that reminder for I find myself sometime slipping into that abyss of guilt and worry that I forget to relish the present
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Nice one Radhika
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Thanks Daneel!
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Welcome Radhika
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Beautiful Haibun…loved reading it
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So very happy to hear that. Thank you very much Balaka!
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My Pleasure
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I enjoyed reading this Haibun. Well written. 🙂
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So glad to hear that. Thank you so much. 🙂
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Refreshing poem to read in morning! Good attempt Radhika! And cheers with my morning cup of tea ☕
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Cheers dear. Have a good day 😊
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Thank You! You too ☺
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Excellent. Your words bring us to a mindful conclusion. I love it! ❤
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Many thanks Colleen for your appreciation 😊
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Beautiful Radhika and my thought is the same of Deepika: “I wonder if you have a magical key board which gives such good direction to your flow of thoughts.”
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A big thank you for such positive feedback. Feeling elated ❤ !
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well written…Excellent!
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Thank you Rashmi!
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Ever been a spectator and see your own life pass you by,it baffles,your piece placed me in a state of hypnosis..great writing
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