
Dusk kisses
shadows dream longer
azure sky changes attire
the sun melts to her seductive charm
consumed in a star lit black magic!
Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.
Nice one Radhika
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Thanks Daneel!
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Welcome Radhika
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Your poems always amaze me
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Thank you so much Balaka 🙂
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Beautiful form done gorgeously♥
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Thanks Sameera 🙂
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Lovely poems! You are truly gifted with the art of expressing
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Appreciate your encouragement Tanvir. Gratitude 😇
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My pleasure 😇
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*Claps* It was so beautifully put together!
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Many thanks Rishhu!
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You’re welcome!
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So nice!!
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Thank you Sandhya!
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Each poetry of yours brings a new dimension of you as a poetess.
Good job, Radhika
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Thanks so much Deepika for the lovely compliment 💜
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This is one of those ‘sigh’ ones! 👍
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Thanks Vidur!
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You are most welcome, Radhika! Sometimes the shorter verses just hold so much magic…
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😊
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So beautiful !
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Thanks Megala!
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Lovely
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Thanks Rashi!
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The fact that you can write poetry following the structure and comes out so beautiful mazes me every single time.
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We belong to the mutual admiration club Megha 💖. Thanks a ton dear!
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Yes we definitely are. I know I keep repeating the same thing every time I read your different kids of poetry…but I can’t stop myself.
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Thanks again 🤗
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So beautiful, as if this can be my favorite but then would be unfair for a lot of your work 🙂
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Aww….so sweet of you, Pragalbha to say that. Thanks a bunch 🙂
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You are very welcome 🙂
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This is awesome. I love it.
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Thank you Tla🙂
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Your compositions are always beautiful and inspiring Radhika!
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Thank you so much Divya 🙏
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This was really stupendous 🙂
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Thanks a million Moushmi ❤ !
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Such a beautiful image created through words!
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Thank you Shaloo!
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Thank you so much for all your sidlak poetry! ❤ reading all your sidlak now and made me so happy ❤
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Thank you so much. I enjoy writing them and am so glad you enjoyed reading them 💝
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stay beautiful ❤
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It’s charming, Radhika! I like this poem.
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Thank you Miriam!
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You’re welcome, Radhika!
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Beautifully penned, the colour “black” shimmers in its glory with your words… 🙂
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Thanks so much Mani 🙂
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Black magic, indeed!
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Gratitude P!
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