Sidlak – Gloomy!

Storm Clouds, Clouds, Thunderstorm, Grey, Sky, Gloomy


set in monochrome

dull overcast canvas drifts

the breeze plays a melancholic tune

paints a gloomy grey picture!

Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem ( no restriction on syllables) or the feelings of the writer.


40 thoughts on “Sidlak – Gloomy!”

      1. Aww you are so kind with your comment. I am tryong to learn every day. Havnt written any Haibun before.There are so many forms of poetry that the learning never stops.


  1. Lovely poem, and your picture goes so well with it. They remind me of the recent thunderstorms we have experienced here, and the farmers are grateful for them.

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