Nomadic thoughts on a whirlwind
running haywire, grossly entangled
a constant battle for supremacy
the mind embroiled in a mess,
endless questions, elusive answers
confusion explodes, cluttered views
explores to find an escape
from the unsettling obscurity
the fragile mind yearns for peace,
free from the endless tempest of commotion!
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A chaotic cauldron of bubbling tumultuous thoughts – very well conveyed, R. I could connect with it. Took me 22 years to comprehend the reasons for the turmoil in my unsettled soul; and once I cracked it, all at once the path which I truly sought lay before me. The fog had lifted from my clouded vision and the sun shone brightly…
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Thanks ! Very few in life are able to clear that fog N. So happy for you. May the radiant rays of the sun shine bright in your life.
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Thank you so much, R, for your good wishes and blessings. You are a very kind soul. May He guide you to discover your true calling in life. Keep smiling; stay happy, always.
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A wonderful peep into the conundrum and chaos of thoughts which keep traveling within, sometimes without reason 😀
Well expressed, Radhika 👍
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Thanks Deepika. Yes, these cacophony of thoughts keep troubling me often !!
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You describe this so well. I relate
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Thank you Lorraine. I guess all of go through this many a time.
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Beautifully penned! Everyone of us could relate these lines as we would have experienced this at some point of time.
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Yes, i am sure we did. Thanks Megala!
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The constant state of an overthinking mind…….. perfectly penned
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Many thanks Sakshi!
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My pleasure
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So beautifully written Dear…the torment well expressed..👌👌
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Thank you Sarika!
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Only wise and understandable mind can give these words
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Thank you Meenakshi 🙏
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Well depicted the state of a confused mind, Radhika!
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Thanks a lot Indira!
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So true we are constantly yearning for peace in this chaotic environment.
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Absolutely Megha.
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I feel you.
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Ohh wow..I related to this so much. Finding peace and symphony in the chaos.
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Thanks Pallavi!
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Radhika, I’m in awe of your poem, capturing the maelstrom of an overbusy mind, relentless, overwhelming! It is a blessing when the transient peace descends, a stillness settling over mind and body! Well done, terrific writing! 😀
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Humbled by your kind words Annika. Thanks a bunch 🤗
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Everyone related to this so much and fragile mind strongly desiring for peace ! Well penned Radhika! 💕
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Thanks S!
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Every single word goes so well with the picture!
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Many thanks dear!
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