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Haiku – Farewell!

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Autumn breeze drifts hearts

scarlet love turns monochrome

somber farewell hug

Mindlovemiserysmenagerie’s photo challenge #333

41 comments on “Haiku – Farewell!

  1. Ramya Vivek
    September 24, 2020

    How you manage to bring out emotions with just a few words, always astonishes me!❤

    Liked by 4 people

  2. Bon Repos Gites
    September 24, 2020

    So evocative!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Era
    September 24, 2020

    Beautiful 💙

    Liked by 1 person

  4. my valiant soul
    September 24, 2020

    Stunning.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. akshita bansal
    September 24, 2020

    Omg..heartfelt🤧🤧💙💙💙

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Deb
    September 24, 2020

    Beautiful lines which leads one to think and contemplate. I can also see us saying farewell to the vibrant colours of autumn which would be blown away to be replaced by the steel grey and the dreary monotony of winter, thankfully short-lived.

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    • radhikasreflection
      September 25, 2020

      That’s the beauty of poetry. Each one feels and experiences a different facet of it. Lovely interpretation to the haiku Deb.

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  7. gulfcoastpoet@gmail.com
    September 24, 2020

    Radikha, I have noticed how being in love makes colors seem more vivid. I guess saying goodbye might well fade colors. I enjoyed the poem. ❤ Take care, Cheryl

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      September 25, 2020

      Yes Cheryl. That’s exactly my sentiments here. Thanks so much for all the encouragement you shower on my work. Grateful 🙏

      Liked by 1 person

  8. Shweta Suresh
    September 25, 2020

    Beautifully penned ♥️

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Untold Stories
    September 25, 2020

    It’s so concise but depicts all emotions so well!

    Like

  10. DeepikasRamblings
    September 25, 2020

    Wonderful parting Haiku ❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Aashi D Parekh
    September 25, 2020

    So beautifully put in few words!!❤❤

    Liked by 1 person

  12. judeitakali
    September 25, 2020

    Painful 😌

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Subbashini Meenakshi Sundaram
    September 26, 2020

    Full of feel. No need to say it is awesome, it will be always.

    Liked by 1 person

  14. bejamin4
    September 26, 2020

    Excellent! Every line perfect. This is extra perfect, though: “scarlet love turns monochrome”.

    Liked by 1 person

  15. Msdedeng
    September 26, 2020

    Very nice poem 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Susi Bocks
    September 27, 2020

    Lovely, Radhika!

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Piyush Gulati
    September 28, 2020

    Very nicely written, Radhika ! ✨

    Like

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