Beautiful lines which leads one to think and contemplate. I can also see us saying farewell to the vibrant colours of autumn which would be blown away to be replaced by the steel grey and the dreary monotony of winter, thankfully short-lived.
Radikha, I have noticed how being in love makes colors seem more vivid. I guess saying goodbye might well fade colors. I enjoyed the poem. ❤ Take care, Cheryl
How you manage to bring out emotions with just a few words, always astonishes me!❤
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Me too! Awesome Haiku, R! Goodbyes are tough and the feeling is so well put here
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Thanks so much HS ❣️
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Thanks so much Ramya for the lovely compliment ❤️
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So evocative!
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Thank you!!
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Most welcome!
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Beautiful 💙
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Thanks Era
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Pleasure always 😊
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Stunning.
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Thank you Devika!
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My pleasure.
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Omg..heartfelt🤧🤧💙💙💙
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Thank you Akshita 💙
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Your most welcome, radhika🤗🤗💙
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Beautiful lines which leads one to think and contemplate. I can also see us saying farewell to the vibrant colours of autumn which would be blown away to be replaced by the steel grey and the dreary monotony of winter, thankfully short-lived.
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That’s the beauty of poetry. Each one feels and experiences a different facet of it. Lovely interpretation to the haiku Deb.
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Radikha, I have noticed how being in love makes colors seem more vivid. I guess saying goodbye might well fade colors. I enjoyed the poem. ❤ Take care, Cheryl
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Yes Cheryl. That’s exactly my sentiments here. Thanks so much for all the encouragement you shower on my work. Grateful 🙏
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Beautifully penned ♥️
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Thanks Shweta ♥️
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It’s so concise but depicts all emotions so well!
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Wonderful parting Haiku ❤️
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🙏😊
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So beautifully put in few words!!❤❤
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Thanks Aashi 💕
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Painful 😌
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Yes…parting always hurts.
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Full of feel. No need to say it is awesome, it will be always.
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Thanks a lot Meenakshi 💞
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Excellent! Every line perfect. This is extra perfect, though: “scarlet love turns monochrome”.
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Glad you thought so Ben. You are always very kind with your words 🙏
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You deserve the kindest words! Have a great rest of your day!
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🙏😇. You too!
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Very nice poem 🙂
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Thanks
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Lovely, Radhika!
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Thank you Susi ❣️
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You are very welcome, Radhika! 🙂
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Very nicely written, Radhika ! ✨
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