Emotional temper soars
rage blurs the mind’s vision
voices reach astounding decibels
heart beat escalates, matching the tempo
tirade of harsh words spew venom
fiery frustrations fold in clenched fists
high voltage drama unfolds.
A blazing inferno fetters the soul
sinks under a dark ocean of wrath
wreaks havoc of toxicity
relationships develop fragile cracks
bonds of friendship scar
dents an irreversible damage.
Time deflates the swollen ire
the gossamer clouding the mind, moves
perspective shifts
streaks of regret get highlighted.
Stay away from soaring tempers
for its aftermath is filled with rueful woe.
Wonderfully expressed poem! More and more people need to read this. The last line speaks to all of us. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Sahana. Very often we are filled with regret once the anger subsides.
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Very well penned👌…speaking quite realistic about emotions…
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Thank you Abhi!
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The way you have expressed anger, the comparisons you have made- they definitely give one goosebumps!
“Stay away from soaring tempers
for its aftermath is filled with rueful woe.” – True!
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Thanks so much Garima.
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This is powerful Radhika.
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Many thanks Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Such an explosive poem, fantastically worded Radhika, I felt this unfolded perfectly and ending warning was 👌
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Thanks a bunch for your appreciation Bree!
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Well written. It is better not to speak when one is angry. My husband does that 😊. I find it a little difficult but I try my best to keep quiet.
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I agree Lakshmi. If we keep quiet for a few mins the anger automatically subsides. Thanks a lot.
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You really built up the tempo with your words! The potent effect of soaring temper, so expertly crafted! Radhika…❤️
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Thank you Punam ❤️
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My pleasure, dear. ❤️
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I amply loved this poem, especially the last two lines:
“Stay away from soaring tempers,
For the aftermath is rueful woe.”
SPLENDID!
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Thanks a bunch A!
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Oh wow. The consequences of soaring tempers beautifully expressed. The aftermath is deeply plummeting. Beautifully written
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Thank you Shweta
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You’re welcome 😁
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Very well penned dear Radhika. You know how to convert feelings to poetry. This is just one. 👏👏
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Humbled. Thanks a lot Preeths ❣️
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ahhh the soaring temper… this is so powerful Radhika
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Thanks Mich!
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Wow R!❤
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🙏❤️
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Wonderfully expressed Radhika. 🌹🙏🏻
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Thank you Amber 💖
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I like the message in the last two lines, Radhika!
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Thank you Indira
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A brilliantly written and powerful piece, Radhika! The last two lines say it all.
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Thanks Eugenia!
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You’re welcome!
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Woww!! Very beautifully penned dear Radhika!! Amazing..!🤗🤗
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You’ve powerfully expressed your message, Ma’am. The last two lines are very true. 🙂
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Thank you Aishwarya 🙂
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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True stay from such tempers or you will be scared for life. Awesome and beautiful poem, Radhika. Loved it.
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Exactly Kamal. Many thanks!
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Always welcome Radhika 😊😊😊
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Yes, and it makes the apology harder! Good take on the prompt, Radhika!
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Thanks Susi!
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You’re welcome, Radhika!
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Very well written. Yes, stay away from soaring tempers.
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Thank you Suni
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wow Radhika! Love you words from the prompt ….. honest and read from sore tempers. 💖
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Thanks a bunch Cindy ❤️
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You expressed the feeling and experience so clearly in a poem, it became an experience reading it – very well done!!!
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Thanks a lot for your kind words Pragalbha!
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You penned the poem with forceful words that perfectly resonated with the mood Radhika. Excellent 👍
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Thank you Sowmya!!
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Such powerful use of words, wonderful read
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Shalini, thank you!
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Wow! That is a great write! Wonderfully expressed. Loved it. 🙂
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As your poem so emphatically states, it’s hardly worth it to lose your temper! Great advice to remember, Radhika! 🙂
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Glad you agree Cheryl. Thanks !
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Beautifully expressed Radhika
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Thanks Tanvir
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