Dusk paints the horizon with amethyst hues
chirpy birds flock back to their nests.
In anticipation, I scamper to the fields
to peer across the setting sun,
drenched in impassioned hope
to see my father’s silhouette walking back,
from the war.
I dream of him all the time
lifting me up, in his strong arms,
tickle my funny bone,
regale me with his stories of valor.
But like every other evening, I walk back alone,
distraught.
I imprison my tears beneath the disguise of fortitude,
so that my defeated eyes never let them out.
People say I am the daughter of a brave soldier!
Lovely, just LOVELY.
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Thank you Yagneshji 🙏
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Love this. 💓
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Glad you liked it Selma. Thanks a bunch!
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You’re welcome a bunch too.
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Oh dear, it’s very lovely. The end made the whole poem beautiful. 😍😍😍
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Thanks a lot Preeths ❣️
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Oh, Mam, the last three lines!! 🥲 A Fantabulous, poignant story expressed in the form of a brilliant poem. Beautiful, Mam! 👌
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Thank you so much Sahana ❤️
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Radhika this is a beautiful poem, touching and heartfelt. Thanks for joining in
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Thank you Sadje 🙏
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You’re welcome
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Achingly beautiful, Radhika. We feel the brave young girl’s pain through your words.
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Thanks Chris. Happy the anguish came through!
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Beautiful expression of a daughter’s anguish, Radhika!
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Gratitude Indira
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Awesome and fantastic poem of a daughter to her father. Great.
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Thanks a lot Kamal
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Welcome always Radhika 😊
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so beautifully penned ❤
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Akshita, thanks ❤️
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What a heartbreaking portrait!
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Thank you V. J
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Welcome
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Beautifully expressed.
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Many thanks Patricia!
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Beautiful
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Thank you Simpson!
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It’s a pleasure
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People say I am the daughter of a brave soldier – oh so heartbreaking this poem is and how you ended it in perfect rhyme and rhythm. It was unexpected and you brought out the innocence and the endearing resilience so beautifully.
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Thanks Pragalbha. Am glad you felt the emotions of the helpless anguish of the little girl.
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My pleasure truly, always beautiful to read from you.
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You always write with so many stunning descriptors and emotions Radhika. This is no exception. Outstanding.
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Thank you for your kind words Bree 😊
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Beautiful.
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Thanks Nick
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Absolutely beautiful, Radhika!
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Thank you Eugi
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A touching piece indeed.
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Thanks Keith
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“I imprison my tears beneath the disguise of fortitude,
so that my defeated eyes never let them out.
People say I am the daughter of a brave soldier!”
These lines are just 💔. So relatable and heart-breaking! Such a profound and beautiful poem Radhika!🌸
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Thank you Deeksha. There may be so many children like her waiting for their father’s return. It is truly heartbreaking.
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Beautiful Radhika. Your words bring out the best of expressions of a daughter’s agony. Loved it.
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Thank you so much Sowmya
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Wonderfully written and so engaging.
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Radhika …this is absolutely stunning…..I am in tears…. Good job 💗
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Am humbled Simaya. Thank you so much 💕
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oh wow Radhika, this is so beautifully penned with such hues of sadness of the brave daughter that waits for those loving arms only to remain empty. Superb job on the prompt💖
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Thank you Cindy 💖
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Always my pleasure dear!❤️
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Deeply moving piece, words dipped in emotions…..
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Thank you Piyush
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Touchingly beautiful, Radhika. ❤️
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Many thanks Punam ❤️
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You are so welcome. 😊
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