My life wore a cloak of mundanity
over my inane wallflower mien,
until I saw you today.
As our eyes locked,
time stood still; the moment frozen.
You cast a magical spell on me,
a heady cocktail of emotions brewed within.
Your seraphic smile ignited a sensory euphoria,
undulating heartbeats drowned me in ineffable feelings.
I was drunk admiring your honeyed beauty,
as my life seemed to slip out of my control.
I must confess it was love at first sight,
or so I thought, until
I saw you walk into his open arms.
Alas,
that was the end of my fleeting love story!
So many myriad emotions captured in these few words, Radhika.
Enraptured by the emotions that she is feeling.
I feel there is some one even better waiting for her out there.
So she better reserve these spilled emotions for that dude. 🙂
Wishing you happy days ahead, dear Radhika. ❤
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Natasha, thanks a lot dear. Yup, I’m sure our poor fella will finally get the girl of his dreams. Have a lovely day and a great week ahead ❤ !
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Sorry for the misplaced genders – in my comment. But love is all that matters amidst all the genders. Happy Pride month too. 🙂
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No worries Natasha. Absolutely agree with you, ” love is all that matters amidst all genders” 👍🏻
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What’s meant to be will be. Do not lose hope. It will be!
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I so agree with your statement Selma. Thanks dear!
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Beautifully written Radhika. I second Natasha’s views that there are so many emotions expressed so well here. Thanks for joining in
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Thanks Sadje. The pleasure is mine 🙂
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Captured emotions beautifully.
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Thank you Patricia!
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Ah the final twist! Beautiful ❤️
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Glad you liked it Daya! Thanks a lot ❤ !
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Beautiful poem R! So many emotions
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Sheereen, thank you!
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Beautiful. How are you Radhika?
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Thanks Arlene. I am good. Hope you are doing fine as well.
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Thank you, I am okay.
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Way to be stirred out of mundanity! :))) Beautiful.
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Thank you Pragalbha!
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Awwww
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😊❤️
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Ah! That love at first sight wala love! Beautifully expressed, Radhika. ❤️
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Thanks Punam…that is a special moment cherished for a lifetime!
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So it is! You are so welcome.
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So many emotions, beautifully expressed, Radhika!
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Thank you Eugenia!
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Most welcome, Radhika!
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So many emotions here. Such a sweet piece.
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Thanks Moushmi. How are you?
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I have been good. How about you?
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Wow.. Another masterpiece here.. 👍🏼😊👌🏼👌🏼🙏🏼❤💕
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Thanks a bunch Debbie ❤ !
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Emotions expressed very well, Radhika.
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Many thanks Suni!
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Splendid and beautifully expressed emotions, Radhika.
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Thanks Kamal!
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Welcome Radhika ♥️
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Greatly composed poetry Radhika. Keep it up!
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Thank you so much Robert!
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Oh, geezz Radhika…you swooned me in the beginning then got my heart broken towards the end…what a love story.
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Ah, thanks so much Mich…life’s like that 🙂
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Ahh, been there a few times. Beautifully written.
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Aww…. thanks Jude
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From delight to despair. A lovely poem, Radhika.
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Thank you Keith
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I love this Radhika. So beautifully done with a fun twist!! I love it!
💖😎🥂🥂
“a heady cocktail of emotions brewed within.
Your seraphic smile ignited a sensory euphoria,
undulating heartbeats drowned me in ineffable feelings.
I was drunk admiring your honeyed beauty,”
🥂🥂🥂🥂
Alas,
that was the end of my fleeting love story!
😂😂😂😂
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Superbly evoked ✍🌹💖
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This poem feels like a sip of age old wine and weirdly enough honey too. Love this🥰
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Haha! Thank you so much 🤗
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Wow… That’s a masterpiece ❤🍃
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So heartfelt and moving Radhika.. brilliant write 👏👏
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Thank you Kirti 🤗
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You’re most welcome always
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Lovely poem Radhika
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so deep radhika 🙂
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Thanks Riddhi
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