radhikasreflection

Everyday musings ….Life as I see it…….my space, my reflections and thoughts !!

Twin haikus!

In response to Ronovanwrites weekly haiku challenge #213 to use the prompt words TIME & MOVEMENT

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Enchanted lovers

synergy of passion flows,

locked hearts, time stands still!

 

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past acts impulsive

present lost in oblivion

worrisome future!

 

IC: pixabay.com

 

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59 comments on “Twin haikus!

  1. Sameera
    August 6, 2018

    Beautiful haikus🌼🌼🌼🌼

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Abhay
    August 6, 2018

    Beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. ~H@rdip~
    August 6, 2018

    I like the way you choose each words 😊 Awesome creation πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

    Liked by 2 people

  4. awisewomansjourney
    August 6, 2018

    Well done! πŸ™‚ ❀

    Liked by 2 people

  5. My Life Aspects :)
    August 6, 2018

    Amazing

    Liked by 2 people

  6. Mukhamani
    August 6, 2018

    Very nice 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  7. syncwithdeep
    August 6, 2018

    Wah.. Kya bath hai.. Superb rads

    Liked by 2 people

  8. The Typewriter
    August 6, 2018

    So nicely you put the proper choice of words… Great..!! πŸ’žπŸ˜‡πŸ‘ŒπŸΌ

    Liked by 2 people

  9. pensitivity101
    August 6, 2018

    Quite lovely.
    Thanks for the link, but it should be to Ronovan’s site as he sets the challenge. (I don’t mind though!)

    Liked by 1 person

  10. boundlessblessingsblog
    August 6, 2018

    Great Haikus and apt pictures, Radhika.

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Nice

    Liked by 2 people

  12. Megha's World
    August 6, 2018

    They are so opposite in emotions but they are beautiful in their own way but I loved second the most. Such a terse way to represent the worrisome future.

    Liked by 1 person

  13. iScriblr
    August 6, 2018

    This is superb! Loved every word of it!❀️

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Pat B
    August 7, 2018

    These are great. They almost seem like they could go together, exactly in the order presented. I don’t know if that was your intent. I can see how they could be completely separate too, depending on how one considers the implications of the words.
    Well done.

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    • radhikasreflection
      August 7, 2018

      Well, to tell the truth that thought did occur to me too πŸ˜‰.
      The second can be seen as a consequence to the first or independent of it.
      Thanks so much Pat for your lovely comment πŸ™‚

      Like

  15. Infinite Living
    August 7, 2018

    Just amazing! Loved them both and the pictures too!

    Liked by 1 person

  16. swalia
    August 7, 2018

    Lovely haikus with apt pictures!!

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Neha Sharma
    August 7, 2018

    Beautiful haikus πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Miriam Hurdle
    August 7, 2018

    They are lovely, Radhika! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  19. amishachawla
    August 7, 2018

    Present lost in oblivion. Beautiful. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  20. jacquelineobyikocha
    August 8, 2018

    A great pair.

    Liked by 1 person

  21. Shantanu Baruah
    August 8, 2018

    Both haiku’s are so amazingly written

    Liked by 1 person

  22. Rishu
    August 30, 2018

    These were so beautifully done! And such great depth to them!

    Liked by 1 person

  23. thewritewomanblog
    September 4, 2018

    Two states of emotions and both are consuming πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  24. Meenakshi Sethi
    September 7, 2018

    You are a person who understands feelings, emotions and life process so well and bind them in your beautiful words πŸ’

    Liked by 1 person

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