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Trapped!

In response to Helene’s What do you see? weekly challenge

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Fighting the tremors of thoughts

dizzied by the voices that scream

battling the figments of doubt

that haunt me in an obscure embrace

 

In the din of the deafening silence

I strain to hear a feeble voice

emanating from deep within

through the veils of gossamer

 

I collect my deviant thoughts

envelope them with a blanket of

hope, trust and faith to

emerge out of the labyrinth

with stronger resilience!

 

39 comments on “Trapped!

  1. syncwithdeep
    February 13, 2019

    Beautiful rads

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Megha's World
    February 13, 2019

    This one is one of my favorites from you. You have created that hope we seem to lose often in a maze-like condition.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. boundlessblessingsblog
    February 13, 2019

    Absolutely true and perfect poetic lines so well composed, Radhika on being trapped and trust and faith can surely emerge with perseverance too.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. krishnapriya108
    February 13, 2019

    Magical writing. Love the way you say — obscure embrace. 👍

    Liked by 1 person

  5. ShankySalty
    February 13, 2019

    Beautiful❣

    Liked by 2 people

  6. Madhusudan
    February 13, 2019

    Beautiful comosition…amazing.👌👌

    Liked by 1 person

  7. pvcann
    February 13, 2019

    For me resilience is the key here, definitely stronger which is how the poem comes across

    Liked by 1 person

  8. iScriblr
    February 13, 2019

    Whoa, brilliant!❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Infinite Living
    February 13, 2019

    This is so deeply beautiful, powerful and meaningful Radhika, I loved it entirely and the picture so perfect!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Hélène - Willow Poetry
    February 13, 2019

    Lovely poem Radhika. It can be frightening at times, loosing ourselves in the maze. You write of hope, trust and faith, which to me is what we need to make it on our journey. Bravo to a splendid composition for this prompt.

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      February 14, 2019

      Thank you so much Hélène. I truly enjoyed writing this one 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      • Hélène - Willow Poetry
        February 14, 2019

        Wonderful, glad you enjoyed the prompt Radhika.

        Liked by 1 person

  11. Kranti
    February 14, 2019

    This is so true and beautifully written!!

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Yasmin
    February 14, 2019

    This is powerful and brilliant❤❤❤
    I bet the end words will fill many of our minds with positive thoughts🤗

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Subbashini Meenakshi Sundaram
    February 15, 2019

    Wow wow, words flow from you like falls carrying the beautiful flowers like meaningful words

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Violet Lentz
    February 17, 2019

    I love the visual of wrapping the deviant thoughts in something so comforting as a blanket. very well done.

    Liked by 1 person

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