In response to Helene’s What do you see? weekly challenge
Fighting the tremors of thoughts
dizzied by the voices that scream
battling the figments of doubt
that haunt me in an obscure embrace
In the din of the deafening silence
I strain to hear a feeble voice
emanating from deep within
through the veils of gossamer
I collect my deviant thoughts
envelope them with a blanket of
hope, trust and faith to
emerge out of the labyrinth
with stronger resilience!
Beautiful rads
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Thanks Deepa 🙂
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This one is one of my favorites from you. You have created that hope we seem to lose often in a maze-like condition.
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Thanks so much Megha 💖
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Absolutely true and perfect poetic lines so well composed, Radhika on being trapped and trust and faith can surely emerge with perseverance too.
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Yes, we need to develop that Kamal. Thanks!!
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Absolutely Radhika
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Magical writing. Love the way you say — obscure embrace. 👍
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Thanks for the appreciation Krishnapriya 💗
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You are so very welcome. 😊
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Beautiful❣
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful comosition…amazing.👌👌
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Thank you Madhusudan 🙂
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For me resilience is the key here, definitely stronger which is how the poem comes across
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Yes I agree Paul. May be I should retitle the poem to convey that spirit 🤔
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O no, don’t mess with it, just reflecting on what came up for me, besides, sometimes the title can be helpful when it doesn’t give the theme away to quickly 🙂
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Haha! Thanks again Paul!
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😁
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No, I’d leave it. 🙂
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Whoa, brilliant!❤️
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Thank you Richa ❤️
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This is so deeply beautiful, powerful and meaningful Radhika, I loved it entirely and the picture so perfect!
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Your feedback makes me happy Pragalbha. Thanks a bunch 🙂
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Lovely poem Radhika. It can be frightening at times, loosing ourselves in the maze. You write of hope, trust and faith, which to me is what we need to make it on our journey. Bravo to a splendid composition for this prompt.
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Thank you so much Hélène. I truly enjoyed writing this one 🙂
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Wonderful, glad you enjoyed the prompt Radhika.
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This is so true and beautifully written!!
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Many thanks Kranti 🙂
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My pleasure always 😊
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This is powerful and brilliant❤❤❤
I bet the end words will fill many of our minds with positive thoughts🤗
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Your comment warms my heart. Thanks a ton dear 🙂
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My absolute Pleasure, Radhika🤗
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Wow wow, words flow from you like falls carrying the beautiful flowers like meaningful words
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Thanks a ton Meenakshi for making my day with your lovely compliment 💖😇
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It’s always a pleasure reading your posts 😍
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I love the visual of wrapping the deviant thoughts in something so comforting as a blanket. very well done.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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