Finally, she said Yes!! My joy knew no bounds. We were going on a date that night, to celebrate this happy day. The soft romantic number playing on the radio, complemented my rapturous mood perfectly.
I took care to dress well. Looking at the mirror, I chuckled. “Hmm, not bad” I said to myself. I splashed some extra cologne and was all set for our celebratory dinner. Looking at the watch, I reminded myself not to be late. She would be here any moment.
As I was coming down the stairs, the sound of the gunshot pierced into the stillness of the evening. I saw her body collapse onto the floor by the front door. A dark figure, furtively darted into the fading dusk outside. I sat there numbed with shock, too dazed to move.
“Cut!”, called the Director. Good shot Morgan! Let’s pack up for the day.
Oh wow! For a moment I was convinced that it was a tragedy. Thanks Radhika for an entertaining story
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Thank you so much Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Amazing Radhika. This is such a wow fiction.
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Thanks a lot Swati!
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This was a great story. I loved the end. A great twist.
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Glad you liked the twist Kritika. Thanks!
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Pleasure is mine. 🙂
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Great story Radhika.. loved the twist at the end.
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Thanks a lot Kirti
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My pleasure 💕
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A spellbinding tale, Radhika! I was so relieved that it was only a movie! ❤
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😊😊 thanks Cheryl ❣️
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The last line came as such a relief! Brilliant!
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Thank you Keith!!
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Great read! What a twist! Crisp and catchy one Radhika 👌👏
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Many thanks Daya 😊
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Ah! You created the right amount of tension, Radhika. Script writing next step….hmm!
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Arre…I have miles to go for that. Thanks for the encouragement Punam!
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Starting is important…you won’t take too long. My pleasure, Radhika.
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Superb superb how much short thrillers i read from here , each one really gives a surprise ending. Love it 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Thanks dear Meenakshi for your kind words of appreciation 💖
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oh my who could have guessed.. nicely done dear! 💖
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Thanks dear Cindy 💖
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You’re so welcome Radhika! 💖
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Oh the range of emotions you took us through in this short read!! Just amazing 🙂
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Thank you Pragalbha!
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Loved the twist, great build up!
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Thanks Aashi
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Totally unexpected last line! Well done.
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Thanks Patricia
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Brilliant Radhika what a twist to your story. Too good.
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Thank you so much Kamal
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You are always welcome dear
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Whew! You had me sitting on the edge of my seat, Radhika!
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What a roller-coaster of an ending! Really well done, Radhika.
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Glad you liked it Chris. Many thanks!
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You’re welcome!
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Amazing Radhika
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Wow, Radhika! A double twist! So very very clever!
Sincerely,
David [ben Alexander]
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Hahaha, nice ending! My kind of story with a twist! I enjoy writing and reading these! Good blog you’ve got here! Coming over from the A-Z but just hanging around, checking other posts too!
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Glad you liked the twist Deepa. Thanks so much!
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