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Poetry

In response to Secretkeeper.net’s weekly writing prompt # 107, to use in a poem or flash fiction  the 5 words below.

 | VERSE | RULE | FIGHT | RIVER | REST |

Here is my attempt:

poetry

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The thoughts are not at rest

 words fight with each other

against an emotional anguish

waging within the warring mind.

 

The vehement altercation goes on

refusing to follow any rules

lost in the mayhem

of strife and turmoil.

 

The fervid mind seeks to untangle

the impetuous mess within

picks up the pen to scribble

some magic on paper.

 

Verses flow gracefully

like the gentle river

calming down the torrents

poetry is truly therapeutic!

 

70 comments on “Poetry

  1. Ben Aqiba
    September 19, 2017

    Beautiful poem:)

    Liked by 1 person

  2. boundlessblessingsblog
    September 19, 2017

    Poetry is really and truly therapeutic. Awesome words, Radhika and a beautiful flow. Great poem.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Miriam Hurdle
    September 19, 2017

    Your poem flows beautifully. Excellent job!

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Moushmi Radhanpara
    September 19, 2017

    This was really wonderful Radhika.

    Liked by 2 people

  5. Bhavana
    September 19, 2017

    Lovely ..liked the way you used five words & the last stanza

    Liked by 2 people

  6. DeepikasRamblings
    September 19, 2017

    Great flow Radhika. 👌

    Liked by 2 people

  7. arlene
    September 19, 2017

    Nice one Radhika 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

  8. Inspiredme
    September 19, 2017

    Awsm post

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Megala
    September 19, 2017

    All the prompts are nicely woven together !

    Liked by 2 people

  10. vidur sahdev
    September 19, 2017

    Wonderfully written, Radhika!

    Liked by 1 person

  11. swalia
    September 19, 2017

    Writing is therapeutic indeed. Beautiful poem!

    Liked by 2 people

  12. vishalbheeroo
    September 19, 2017

    Pure bliss and intensity where words flow like the spring leaves. There is not a dull instance in this poem that inspires and brings so much beauty to the soul.

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      September 19, 2017

      Your comment has brought a smile to my face. Thank you so much Vishal for those beautiful words of appreciation 😇😇

      Liked by 1 person

  13. Author: Sadaf Siddiqi
    September 20, 2017

    Such a nice poetry.

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Meenakshi Sethi
    September 21, 2017

    Reading your words too are therapeutic Radhika! ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  15. thesilencethatneverbroke
    September 25, 2017

    wonderful!
    read my poetry and quotes blog @ https://wordpress.com/view/thesilencethatneverbroke.wordpress.com

    Liked by 1 person

  16. thewritewomanblog
    September 25, 2017

    I am sure it is! Specially with a beautiful poem from my best poet.
    You have managed to use your week’s quota of prompts, Radhika.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. delphini510
    September 27, 2017

    Beautiful flow and strong emotions in your poem.
    Perhaps it is so, that writing is a therapy to ourselves. Yes, it is true….
    Well done
    miriam

    Liked by 1 person

    • radhikasreflection
      September 27, 2017

      Thank you so much Miriam. The feeling of happiness that envelopes me when my words dress up my thoughts, is magical 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  18. meghasworld
    September 29, 2017

    Love your writing. A million thanks for following my blog.

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Anshuman
    October 4, 2017

    beautiful composition…..I have also written a Poem on poetry…please read my creation and give your review…..
    I hope you will like it..

    Liked by 1 person

  20. akratiblog
    October 6, 2017

    true that! maybe you can read my blogs too..sometimes.. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  21. Rishabh mishra
    October 11, 2017

    I really like the poem ….i hope u will like mine too …kindly visit my blog i will feel honoured !!
    https://bleedingthoughtsweb.wordpress.com

    Liked by 1 person

  22. princepatrice
    October 13, 2017

    Wow, I like your poem, so nice

    Liked by 1 person

  23. wordsmadeofjade
    October 20, 2017

    So beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

  24. marandarussell
    October 20, 2017

    Great poem! I’m a poetry blogger too, would love for you to come by sometime!

    Liked by 1 person

  25. shubhamr238
    October 25, 2017

    Its really a nice work..
    we started a blog for the same purpose
    do visit us at
    https://bleedingthoughtsweb.com/2017/10/12/a-romantic-date/
    hope you will find it interesting..

    Like

  26. foodforthought
    October 26, 2017

    Words have come from the depth of your heart..excellent choice of words!!
    ..i have been writing rhyming poems too…do chck them out..thnk u..https://debolden.wordpress.com/

    Liked by 1 person

  27. ESP xtruck
    October 27, 2017

    this is so beautifully written, also completely agree!

    Liked by 1 person

  28. helpfuladvocate
    November 16, 2017

    moving words for sure!

    Liked by 1 person

  29. "Jay Pines"
    November 26, 2017

    Nice job! I find these types of challenges can push us to produce some of our best work! That’s in my experience, at least.

    Liked by 2 people

  30. Shiva Malekopmath
    December 10, 2017

    In the words that are to be used the poetry has come out beyond thought process.
    I just loved to read it Radhika.
    Shiva

    Liked by 1 person

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