In response to The Sunday Whirl, #443 to weave the above words together.
The trek into the woods with friends went totally awry. The adventurous I, ventured off limits. The tumble down the slope, left me bruised and alone.
Lost in the wilderness, I tried to figure a way out. The air reeked of pungent forest smells. Howl and cries of the wild beasts echoed. Dark foreboding clouds loomed over the dense canopy of trees. The silhouettes seemed to draw an eerie imagery against the darkness. My heart was pounding loud. I felt something move slyly to my side and let out a shriek. Taking to my heels, I turned and ran far. Panting and gasping for breath, I eased my steps a bit.
Suddenly I felt a piercing pain grip through my arm. I could feel blood trickling down. Fear and panic gripped me. I felt myself losing control, when a pair of strong arms held me before I slipped into a dark void….
Wow, Radhika. Awesome !!
My next challenge for you is to take up writing a novel..bolo manzoor hai?
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Haha! Thanks Deepika. Maybe sometime down the line 😀….
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So beautifully written 👍
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Thanks Rubina 🙂
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A fine weaving this is, Radhika!!
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Excellent weave this is, Radhika!!
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Thanks a lot Indira 🙂
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Fabulously written Radhika, especially liked the way you ended it…
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Thank you so much Shefali 🙂
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Loved the flash fiction
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Thank you Shantanu!
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My absolute pleasure
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NICE!!!!! you left me wanting to read more.
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Happy to hear that Pallavi. Thanks so much 🙂
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More, R, more! Where’s the rest of it? Yet another feather in your full crown – an awesome thriller! 👏🏻👍🏼
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Thanks a ton N for your constant support. 🙏. I generally like to leave the ending to the readers imagination 😊
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Ha ha…wicked (just like me – I do that in my stories too!) 😄
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Well, I guess great minds think alike 😉😊
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A true cliffhanger, radhika! Love it.
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Many thanks 🙂
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Awesome, eerie, ……you can make the key board dance with your finger tips to paint a mood you want!
Alfred Hitchcock would have loved to write a script for his next suspense thriller.
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That’s a huge compliment you have bestowed on me. Truly humbled 🙏
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