In response to Kat’s twittering tale #127, write a tale on the prompt in 280 letters or less.
The rain lashed against the menacing wind. A few stray dogs howled giving the deserted station an eerie feel. The train was all set to chug along. At the stroke of midnight, Alberto lit a cigarette, checked his pistol and boarded the train. It was time to carry out his plan.
Letter count : 277
Wow. That’s fantastic job.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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I love precise and concise writing.
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🙏🙏
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Lovely work by you
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Thank you Tanvir!
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Good story
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Thank you Drew!
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I wonder what happened next…..😅
Love your words Radhika.. they’re creating the effect perfectly!
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Thank you Vrunda 😊
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So apt and perfect, loving the rhythm here.. well done Radhika.. 😇💕
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Thanks so much Debika 💖😊
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Picture perfect!!!
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Thank you Shaloo!
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Absolutely well done!
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Many thanks Moushumi!
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Nice! Very concise but deep!
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Thanks Betul!
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This is super! Brilliantly done!👏👏
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Many thanks Richa 🙂
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very atmospheric, great take 🙂
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Thank you Kate!
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Wow, how do you come up with such novel ideas. You can author a book, Radhika !!
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That’s so sweet of you to say Deepika. Thanks for the encouragement 😇💖
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Oooh, very mysterious. You set the scene so well!
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Thanks a lot Kat 🙂
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Superb!! 👏
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Thanks Kranti!
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I love how your words flow Radhika, well done!!!
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Gratitude Paulo 🙂
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Perfection how you do this !! 🙂
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Thanks Pragalbha 🙂
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Nice atmosphere-building.
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Thank you Anurag!
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👏👏👏
Brilliant!!!
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Thank you Yasmin 💖
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Firstly I was so happy to see a tale. Truly I love all your short stories. I believe collectively you can release them as a book. All are wonderful.
(My daughter is having speech trouble ma’am, daily she will color something like this, so to encourage her I did it)
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Thank you so much for always supporting and appreciating my work Meenakshi. You are very kind 💖.
Regarding your daughter I am sure you must be taking all medical help as required. But I am very happy that you are encouraging her in artistic pursuits too. Art is truly therapeutic. With the right guidance she can shine in creative field. God bless ❤️❤️
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🙏🙏🙏😍👍
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oh dear..the start of a thriller.
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😀
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I could feel the tension and determination.
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Thanks 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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Wow a great story and an apt picture too of the guy silently smoking a cigarette
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Thanks a lot Kamal!
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Welcome Radhika
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Your short tales are so agonisingly thrilling!! Thrilling because they are such a cliffhanger…!! And agonising because that’s all we get to read and there is no more to them!!!!! 😩😩
Want to read more till the end!!! 😭
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Haha! Thanks for that lovely compliment Sifar 😇
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Nice one Radhika
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